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Oh sorry, I nodded off there trying to finish this fuckin garbage. The only good thing I can say about this story is that it feels just like playing Golden Sun, it puts me to fuckin sleep.

Read my story is you want an example of how to make something good out of this trash series' boring ass plot.

So good. So, so good.

I don't know if I have anything meaningful to say other than this is my most favorite thing I have read in the GS fandom for a while. You really mastered the art of giving just enough information to entice the reader. Nothing is heavy-handed, yet nothing is too sparse, either. On top of that, the writing flowed well; no extraneous words, and excellent word choice. Everything was on lock.

Spot on characterization. Imilshipping will always work in the context of codependency/manipulation, and I appreciate that you were not afraid to tackle that aspect. I really enjoyed this, thanks for putting it out here.