Oh yes please... although one way you could have him go back is to learn a spell to get back home

Please do more of these

I love you're writing and progression of this story! But please for the love of God do not include more pedophilia! The other things are funny and enjoyable except when I have to read this phrase: I groped her breast less chest... that line is just... wrong. Anyway keep on writing this incredible fanfiction!
-OwO

There is mentally something wrong with you, this piece of work and your attitude disgusts me

NO NO NO! NO others boys involved! please!

if you really want to improve the quality of this fic, delete all that is yuri/ntr in the next chapters, let Kirito be the ONLY ONE to fuck his girls! him and no one else.

NO other boys involved please! it's not a harem story if other boys are involved.
cheating / yuri is the worst, it ruins my fun

The nonchalant attitude that Kirito and Nicky had was priceless and then when Asuna and Dawn commented on it I just about died of laughter great chapter.

That 3rd author's note made me feel like 'Woah, big brain.'

you say it's a boy and his harem. why girls ntr Kirito? specially Asuna ?!

good idea but horrible execution! please avoid this kind of scenes, it's no longer a harem story if Kirito is ntr

A story with potential premise but ends up having horrendous execution.

Fuck Kirito x Asuna ! Kirito x Alice is the best !

Plz don’t delete it

Don’t delete this story. You have a talent for this

Oh believe me, I've had this thought in my head many times before. I've written harem stories before and they tend to go one way or the other. Even more so when it comes to stories with lemon content in them.

Whilst I commend you for trying to write a harem story, I do have to slightly agree with some of the other reviewers in regards to the crossovers. I think those should've been left alone and have the story focus on just the SAO cast. Cause when I first read this story, I found it to be alright until the crossovers started taking place and I was confused on why all that was happening.

At the end of the day, it's up to you on what you want to do with the story. Though in my personal opinion, there are very few SAO harem stories that exist on here and most of them tend to end up being abandoned and incomplete. This one has a lot of controversial stuff, but I think if those were ironed out and start the story over with a well planned out plot, it could be so much better.

Please don't delete this, despite how it is, This story is one of the rare harem lemon fanfiction of SAO.

You can write different stories on the same account, but deleting this story, with so many words and followers would be a shame