You might want to go back through chapter 7, it is missing parts of the story.

I feel like going this much in-depth on Harry’s grandparents is a little too much this early on. We really have delved into the main plot of your story or set up Harry’s path yet. I think letting the story unfold first would make this a little more significant. You could also use it as a breather from the main story later on.
Also, you used “simply” way too often this chapter.

The use of Fleur was brilliant

This was an interesting chapter

Very interesting with the giants

That’s as fun

The only part of the original story that I did not like was killing off Luna, even if she was not really in the story. Please don't do that in this new rewrite. Also please use her more in this version. She is my favorite in the Harry Potter stories.

Reading this story reminds me of my favorite quote:

"We sought freedom, and our brothers and sisters paid the price for it. There's only one way to pay them back. From the first day I came here to kick my compatriots to their deaths. From the day you brought your sister outside the wall. Those actions will follow us until they're repaid. Even if we die. Even after we die. After all...you started this story, didn't you?" - Eren Kruger

I like the story, but I have some constructive criticism about how lily speaks with Harry when he dies in the first chapter. She’s his mom, and I feel that she would at least say sorry that she’s sending her only child back to a life of pain, suffering, and a flip flopping public. I can tell you’re sort of alluding to that thought, but I think that in a mother-son relationship, it wouldn’t just be alluded at. It would be said. I know this is nit picky. But I honestly think it’ll make the chapter better

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

He is turning into quite the ladies man, I also had quite a good laugh towards that end. I look forward to more, best of luck that you are and remain hale and whole.

You state here that Charlus leads Harry to the graves but I think you mean Arcturus.

I am loving this as I have all of your stories so far but Imperial Units in the UK? The my should be using Metric Units.

Bon chapitre

Is Harry just flirting with fleur or is this going to be a harry/multi (which I would be fine with)? Seeing how he seems to be the heir/head of two families it wouldn't be unusual for him to have multiple wives.