For pairings how about a little bit of BOTH?

Oh please update this I have enjoyed reading it. Made me cry and laugh.

Great story! Look forward to the next one.

I love it. I wish you can continue. The end of Ch22 is a great ending.

Severus does at times seem very welcoming to the interest that Harry has in him & the actually fact that he wants Severus as his mate but at the same time I do think that
Severus's own fear of rejection/or having his heart broken is definitely making him seem either unwilling or at the very least wary of being pursueded by Harry. Perhaps some of Severus's waryness towards Harry's declaration of them being mates is due to the fact that technically Harry's was his student (or still is) before he disappeared
...and that Harry would have been in the 7th Yr? Undoubtably Severus does need to know/or be informed about the whole mate issue between himself & Harry...and Harry's probably going to have to seriously work at capturing Severus by using some of that previously hidden Slytherin cunning!

I really do wish that Harry had needed to take some type of revenge against both
Hermione & Ron for there betrayal...though perhaps they won't be content to remain so passive if they should happen to learn that Professor Severus Snape is his mate?

Hmmm...if 1 year in the wizarding world is equal to 5 years in the demon realm & if
Harry was either 14 or 15yrs old when he disappeared then he'd have to be either 19 or
20 yrs old in the demon realm...or perhaps he doesn't appear to older? Though given all that Harry's been through and experienced since his parents were murdered its not
at all surprising that he has many issues with abandonment, self-esteem, sense of self-
worth but also why the betrayal of both his best friends (Hermione & Ron) has hit him so hard because of his childhood with the Dursleys.

Also while both Ron & Hermione both seemed to complain about the danger they'd had to court whilst being friends with Harry...but if they truly felt like that then just why did they remain friends with him at all? Another point is that through the trios
various encounters whilst at Hogwarts never once did Harry actually ask or order them
to go along with him...unless someone manipulated or encouraged them to play along
at being Harry's friends, such as Albus Dumbledore? Perhaps someone that had wanted
Harry to be the perfect "golden gryffindor, boy-hero" who'd obediently off Voldemort
when asked & do what he was told...someone who certainly made sure Harry met the
Weasley's at Kings Cross & heard plenty of negative things about Slytherin house,
such as Dumbledore? Can't wait to see if I'm right...plus just who Harry can truly
trust at Hogwarts & within the Order but also if the prophecy supposedly uttered by
Trelawney is actually true at all?

Hmm...I can't help but wonder just how Sirius will take the news of Harry's appearance since his transformation...or if Sirius knew about the latent demon connection in James Potter's family? Along with that I do kinda think that Remus is likely to take the news of Harry's demoness rather well because he's been subjected to
the very negative, darkside of wizarding culture's biogtry towards werewolves so I don't see him being bothered that Harry's a demon. But just how much does the wizarding
world actually know about the demon realm or the type of demon Harry's transformed into?

If Harry does intend to take some form of revenge against Hermione Granger & Ron
Weasley for there betrayal...perhaps Harry should find out just who else has betraye
him or kept secrets from him before he reveals himself to the wizarding world? Is
there truly anyone in the wizarding world (apart from perhaps Sirius & Remus) who
does truly miss Harry or concerned for his safety since his disappearance? Just what
does the Hogwarts staff, the student body, the ministry, general wizarding population
or Voldemort (if already resurrected?) & his death eaters think in regards to
Harry's disappearance?

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

Wonderful story. Great job.

That was beautiful! Though, you don't have it marked as 'complete,' so... is it still incomplete?

*sing-song voice* Somebody's been watching too much Beetlejuice! Seriously though, I love your spin on that place.

I liked it, a little rushed but good. 5/10

*Grinning* lovvvvvvve it!:))

is this the end or is there more to come? after all it has been several years since you have updated this story i just wanted to tell you how awsome the story is and i would like to know what happens next...

thank you it was a good one