Wish fulfilment at its worst

Been awhile since I have read this fic, and honestly I'm not sure that I haven't enjoyed reading it more the second time than the first.

That said, there were a few errors at the end of this last chapter (a couple of missing words that made a few statements/sentences incomplete. The scene with the Stark's hiding in the tunnels beneath the Red Keep, I felt could have been expanded upon, the fact that it was so short made it feel (for myself at least) a bit jumbled and difficult to distinguish the amount of time that was actually spent in hiding. Was it a number of hours, or was it a couple of days? The fact that multiple meals had been brought to them encourages the theory that it was at least a day if not longer, but the fact that Cersei would have had the Gold Cloaks/Lannister men searching the Red Keep in full force makes me think that it couldn't have been more than a few hours at most. Just a little bit of clarification would be helpful in that scene, I think.

Other than that, phenomenal work! I hope to be able to read more of your work, in the hopefully very near future.

Cersei only acted against Ned because he threatened her son and told her the truth, she even said him to take his daughters and go to North after bending the knees.

Happy New Years xoxo

You’re back! I’m so happy there was an update. Back in May but it doesn’t matter. So happy so start reading again:)

please update, it's interesting

Please when are you updating

Too unrealistic. Robert wouldn't let them live whatever Tywin would do.

Eager for more!

Please continue!

Love to see Cersei take down by dragons not bricks lol.

Surprised that Varys hasn’t said anything about the dragons.

Great chapter!

Daenerys:)
Hope they change her fate.

Love this!