Moooooooooorrrrreeeeeeee!

Hi, random reader here commenting on how much I enjoyed reading the story. Granted, I only know about the series through the anime and the brief goggling on the novels so I was worried I might be entering spoiler territory at first but I found how briefly the events in the novels are skimmed over and forgotten so I'm thankful for the majority of spoilers being avoided.

Anyways, I enjoyed how you maintained the spirit of the series with Jade's murder since it kept to the characters' personality. While I would have liked Jade to stay longer and actually bond with the guardians, or even come back down the line with the aid of a World Item, it's rather unlikely since if such an item existed and was brought to the New World, more players would still be around.

Regardless, while her death was regrettable, it does allow for the Floor Guardians to finally grow from their mistake. Something that will haunt them for the rest of their existence, especially if Ainz does decide to leave Nazarick to get away from it all even if it is for a short time.

However, there was something that was bothering me, in the scene where Ainz is researching in the library as Jade's death, I was confused at whether he was in his human form or not since the scene described his skeletal hands and yet also included him having hair.

Momonga got fucking angry. Me Gusta. I likey. Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.

Amazing! So who will be Ainz's Main-Head wife? Since Albedo officially gave up on becoming Ainz's lover as punishment.

FINALLY! OMG CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE!

Love this story dude, it doesn't matter if its 3 words at a time, I will be happy all day long after you publish something!
Also, Im really happy you didn't die. But for real, if you need some time, take all you want.

Damn, this story is full of emotions. Jade's death was so long ago but i still feel the pain in my heart. I can still feel the anger and pity i felt towards the guardians. This story is truly awesome ️

recordman i see your a man of culture as well.

as always i love to see your back! :D

So will Ainz use a world item to bring Jade/Lenora back?

Thanks for the update! I loved how revenge played out and Neia's induction into Nazarick. I always love a good training and redemption arc. I look forward to what more that you put out for this story with regard to the Guardian's acts to redeem themselves and plead for Ainz's forgiveness through their devotion, dedication, and actions.

My only real problem with your fic is that you abuse the first person narration. It feels weird reading some phrases. The easy solution is to start using third person narration, more manageable.

I see you're taking great care in Albedo's character development, especially with the self-imposed punishment. I find it fascinating. I'm seeing this story as a philosophical battle between Ainz and himself. My favorite component to your writing ability are your descriptions. They are well done and leave me wanting to dust of and stretch my own imagination. Nothing to critique as I would have to reread more critically from the beginning to do so, but nothing glaring that has jumped on my radar. Best of luck on your novel!

Another great chapter, so glad to see you're back

Hell yay glad you are back and alive my friend keep up the good work.