Really been going through a Naruhina binge, and I came across your story. I love your writing, each chapter really paints a clear picture, and your characterization is great. It’s angsty, and their confusion and emotions really come across well. Looking forward to reading what happens next!

Angst angst angst... and you have no intention of resolving any of this anytime soon, don’t you.

They’re all like, six years old, after all. So we have YEARS of this to look forward to.

I really dislike stories where Naruto sits there and takes crap from academy instructors, knowing that 100% they’re sabotaging him, and he never once goes to the Hokage to rectify things, or even respond in a way that’s equal... as what they’re doing should be treason in a military village.

Awesome story

Pretty neat, the beginning felt a little weak but other than that no major qualms

Good read. Thanks

Like the plot lineee so far. Active emotion on Hinata's part. Thanks

If done right I can see Hinata being like , I can not recall her name off the top of my head, the captain of the 4th division of the anime of bleach all ways soft spoken with a smile but can scare anyone with just barely a change in her smile in a little bit power leaking out and can fight like a demon.

Mmmm oh well

booo I was hoping for a new chapter

Nice work I look forward to more

This story is pretty good so far. Keep writing and stay safe.

This story is well written and well paced. I really really like your style and the universe you are creating. I’m excited for when you update next.

Wow I just started reading this today, simply put this is great. My emotions are all over the board, the characterization is spellbinding. I am truly looking forward to your next update.

Good story so far. I'm a sucker for grounded, pragmatic Naruto stories. I think chapter 4 felt a bit abruptly bleak with Hinata trying to stab her eyes out. I think you should have spent at least a chapter building up to such a dark moment. Other than that, good stuff all around.