Reviews for look at what you want (not at where you are)
Natalie Rushman chapter 1 . 7/12
So sad ;( But really believable. I like the way you wrote this. The characters have all been effected, and I think you presented it in a true-to-life way. I especially appreciated Tony's development. Seeing him and Steve "parenting" was actually pretty sweet X) The bit where Steve empathized with Thor, talking about how he'd lost everything when he came out of the ice was insightful, and I loved the way you used it to hint at the way Steve's gonna go at the end of the movie.

Great job! I loved this X)