Reviews for Seeing Stars
Shareon chapter 14 . 13h
This story seems like an interesting premise. Thank you for writing it.

I find myself confused about the character motivations in the story. For example, I missed why Nezu so wants Ranma to attend, to the point of undermining Aizawa's choice. I also missed why Aizawa assigned Ranma to tutor Midori. I missed why so many students would respect Ranma (a fellow student) above and beyond what is typical. I'll admit to skimming the story and primarily knowing My Hero Academia through fanfiction, so that could very much be an issue on my part.

(This is prescriptive, so feel free to disregard, but it may be worthwhile to consider changing things to have Ranma being older and out of school, especially given the relative age of the series and settings, so it would be natural to explain why Ranma left Nerima and how he/she could end up being a supernumerary member of the staff.)

This could be me, but I'm a bit put off by the cadence of this story. For example, in Chapter 8, Aizawa says to get outside and then Ranma jumps out of a window. While I see this as being very appropriate, it was very easy to miss the few words in the indirect prose as demanding the urgency to get out ASAP. Likewise in Chapter 14, with Ranma tying up
Toru in such a provocative way, I had to read it three times before I realized why Toru was tied up at the end of the story.

Regardless, if we accept the character motivations for why they are acting as they are, it is a reasonable execution of a "Ranma goes to U.A. High School," with definite shades of fix-fic in it as well.
StrongGuy159 chapter 23 . 8/29
Cool story continue please.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 8/11
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
Sungawd Ra chapter 23 . 8/6
I’m going to be honest, the premise is pretty dumb. It’s a bit unbelievable, and that’s saying something considering the series involved.

That being said, I’m really enjoying the steps you’ve taken to integrate them together, and I look forward to reading more.

Still, could you not nerf Ranma to be on even a martial artist level Stain? I like Stain as much as the next guy, but he was basically taken down by 3 pre heroes. Powerful ones, but still. I don’t want to blow up his abilities, but I’d be surprised if Ranma couldn’t take on the current League of Villains and probably win.

Lastly, you seem to be speeding through a lot of material and revelations quickly. I’m not sure how long you’re planning on writing this, but hindsight (foresight?) is toxic to a story. It probably wouldn’t hurt to slow down the flow, so it feels more natural to introduce elements that show up way down the line. Eri and Happi is interesting, but feels a bit weird to see on the second day. And it takes a huge conflict out of the story later. Not bad, but it almost seems like a waste, in my opinion.
samuelcaldeira76gmail.com chapter 23 . 7/31
Thanks for the chapter hope you update again
Princess Asuna chapter 23 . 6/23
looking frward to more wonderful chapters!
auraofcalm chapter 23 . 6/21
Happosai's soft side is always nice to see. I'm sure he will actually do his best to do right by her. That said, it's a good thing she already has a name. :p
dragonfighter11 chapter 23 . 6/21
Is there a set pairing for Ramna yet? Honestly I wouldn't mind a multi pairing with Momo, Mei and invisible girl~ They all fit him in their own ways imo
Innortal chapter 3 . 6/14
I can just see the chaos of Nezu going to Nerima. People will pour water of both temperatures on him, assuming he is Jusenkyo-cursed. Seeing him and assuming such, I imagine Soun and Genma crying, because it will mean there is no cure for Jusenkyo, because obviously Nezu tried to use Drowned Man to cure himself and ended up with a mixed curse.

"Oh," Soun whined, "if only we had some clue that this could happen!?"

"You mean, aside from Taro?" asked Nabiki.

"Why were we never told!?" continued to whine Genma, ignoring her.
clockright chapter 17 . 6/1
I love the Little Washu cookie at the end of this chapter, and it's quite well hidden in plain sight. I think that Ranma now has three girls that like him, and might be willing to share although Momo seems a little jealous.

I don't think they would be actively trying to kill one another in any case, but there are other ways girls can play by being mean spirited. Still all three of them are showing interest in him which could be bad.
Ranmaleopard chapter 23 . 5/12
As always this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue
Enoch chapter 23 . 5/8
Are we gonna have a slightly perverted Eri now, honestly I love the redeemable pervert type as it show that they won’t go to far and actually have a chance to be a good person. Also will uncle Happy and Eri pat a visit to Cologne and then Ranma?
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 22 . 5/3
You know, it occurs to me that Genma should've come running after Ranma by this point. And no matter how pathetic he is, he IS a master thief. So, him being able to sneak in and grab Ranma out from under the Pro-Heroes' noses seems like something well within his skill set.

Just a thought.
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 11 . 4/30
You got the mother and father parts of that French Knights insult mixed up; the mother was the hamster and the father smelled of elderberries.

Nice Team Four Star reference BTW!
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 23 . 4/28
Hm...Not sure if I like the idea of Happy getting his grubby paws on Eri. Oh well, guess I'll see where this goes.

PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
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