Great update! I like the way you showed the magic taking it's toll on him.

Please continue this. I can't wait to see where this goes!

Wow. This is a promising story. Keep it up

Lol ;) I liked seeing it from both perspectives.

I enjoyed seeing a little bit more of what's going on in Loki's head. Thor's in for a bit more than he bargained for this time though!

Oooh, dark magic. Resurrecting her mother, I'm guessing? I'm intrigued. Loki's being really supportive here. It's nice to see X)

Loki can use telepathy?! That's cool ;) I feel like there's maybe more going on with Thor's group than is obvious. And I'm really curious to see what Eira knows!

I like that you haven't shown Loki as being bitter or angsty - much as I like those stories too, it's a nice change ;)

I liked the bit in the past with Frigga explaining to Thor and Loki about the Odinsleep X)

That was beautiful! They're really cute together X)

They're really cute together X) I'm not usually too big a fan of OCs, but Eira's actually really cute. I like seeing Loki's clumsy attempts to distract her - he's adorable X)

Poor Eira! Loki's being very kind to her.

Loki's being really sweet here! I guess I'm used to reading stories where he's either desperately depressed or being a little shit X) It's nice to see him like this. I love the way you write! You do a fantastic job of setting the scene without slowing down the narrative - I think I said something about that last time, but it bears repeating because it's a balance that is hard to find. I'm really excited to see what's coming next!

Ooh! Neat start! I like the way you describe the locations. Very rich, but it doesn't bog down the narrative. I'm really interested to see where this goes!

I enjoyed this chapter, i love little!loki