MAAAAAN, WHERE IS UPDATING?
I'm from 24 chapter.

Just getting super weaklings for his crew even though he is going to fight big mom... just poor writing

Water logia? Really? Dumb devil fruit

I am a little confused about NARUTO’S nickname it feels a little off I mean it’s simple I mean I don’t mean to sound insulting but water-man doesn’t sound the coolest especially for a pirate i mean there’s fire fist ace, straw hat Luffy

uhhh so just an opinion but i feel like the whole early life thing was kinda really rushed. excepts for that gol d roger part, that was good

For a yonko you made Naruto way way way too weak and the ned man oh man why the heck did you think he could be caught off guard by a facking dark of all things. I know widebeard was stabbed at the back but come on he was at his end sick and could only stand there before he used all his strength to fight. Please rewrite the chapters and make him worthy of the name yonko and a lasth thing please make the fights better they are way to sort especially when he fought a yonko it was only like a short chapter if he could defeat bigmom a yonko like this why are 2 captains and 2 nobody give him so much difficulty ?

Fake Crossover - boring

Sigueeeee

why not oc instead of reincarnated naruto but with no connection at all with him?

Hi there

You really have to end the chapter like that again, I am glad Naruto met his brother, but I can't wait for Luffy's reaction to that statement at the end!

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

wonder how luffy will react to this?

Awesome chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeah,FINALLYYYYYUYYY PLEEEASEEEE UPDAAATEEEE SOOOOOOON

water fruit, so stupid, ruining the point of devil fruit...