I really liked the idea of Jess actually admitting his real issues. Plus you know if he had told Rory that she would have taken him back. He was the guy she wanted to give her virginity to, you know she loved him.

This would have been a beautiful storyline

I agree I wish Jess had done this in the show. I liked this story.

I liked this a lot - shows the side of Jess that Rory knew about. They have so much in common. Keep writing for us. Thanks so much.

One shot or are you going to rewrite Gilmore Girls? Because I honestly think this is how it should have gone. Even if I do believe Jess needed to grow on his own in New York, and then again in Philly, before becoming the new and improved Jess we see at the elder Gilmores house when Rory is living there. It's possible he could have gotten there with Rory at his side had they been more open to communication.

Continue with this please! Next chapter I'm ready!

This was really good! Will there be more, or an epilogue!

I liked it. And yeah, that would've never happened, but that's kind of the point of fanfic. I also think if he had shown back up or been more open earlier, that the whole mess of her entitled college persona wouldn't have happened because he grounded her.