Reviews for A Shinobi's Awakening
biob1 chapter 5 . 4/7
The amount of perspective changes is becoming a little annoying. Also personally I enjoy harem stories it is often no less realistic than the stories themselves it is fanfiction afterall. I just don't understand how you can say you enjoy reading something but won't write it.
biob1 chapter 1 . 4/6
Nice job just not a fan of the whole elemental nations being surrounded by fog thing separating them from the world.
Takedo chapter 2 . 4/5
There's a recurring problem with it's and its. it's
calming-seas88 chapter 8 . 3/18
It is completely reasonable to not being able to write this story during these times. I hope that you and your family stay safe!
Rio Skyron chapter 8 . 3/18
As long as you aren't dropping this I'm good
Guest chapter 8 . 3/17
I’ll pray for you too. I’m sorry things are like that.
HoangKimVu chapter 8 . 3/17
Everything will be alright
Guest chapter 8 . 3/17
Dude i hope u get out of this situation. Ur not alone. Stay safe
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 5 . 2/6
Fox babies are kits. Cat babies are kittens. Please use correct terminology.
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 5 . 2/6
Great story, grammar needs work though. A beta works help to clean up your chapters. I would offer, but I make a point of not doing stuff for people online when I'm busy offline. Plus I haven't tried the beta system here yet. Let me know once you get one, I want to see this at its best!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/16/2019
Great chapter! Keep it up!
Dewpoint chapter 7 . 10/14/2019
Had to throw in a review after I saw your comments on mine, glad I was able to find this nice crossover! Not sure how I didn't see this before but you definitely have a really entertaining way of writing Naruto and Morgan in this world. I could definitely take a note or two about how you write action sequences as well, love the expression in your writing since it's clear you've done your research on the source materials!

Anyways hope you can continue to get good mileage out of your muse, thanks for your support and happy to see this fic also continue to get updates. Looking forward to whatever else you have in store!
Dracus6 chapter 7 . 10/14/2019
Fire Emblem Three Houses and RWBY Crossover
AU instead of 4 Kingdoms they will be 7.
The Adrestian Empire The Holy Kingdom of Faerghus and The Leicester Alliance will be part of Remnant.
it will focus on both Three Houses and RWBY storyline.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
Please update the story soon. Also for a pairing just keep it as Naruto x Robin x Lucina.
Anonymaous chapter 7 . 10/1/2019
This fic lost its interest when naruto characters appeared doesn't matter if they are clones or whatever. If I wanted to read about naruto Characters I would go to the anime fanfic section.
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