Wow this chapter has some serious plot milestones. Loving the story!
Jardan works (thumbs up). I like the symmetry of both Vlad and Danny being split too.

In this chapter I really enjoyed villain development. I've always thought Vlad was a great villain.. he's like an evil Bruce Wayne... suave, smart, focused, power through riches and mind. I'm glad Vlad here has wit and a slickly efficient masterplan.

Also Val and Dan are so darn cute. She just steamrolls over his silliness and it makes me laugh. Great job with those two! I am eager to see what on earth could change Stubborn Val's mind!

This is a really original take on the Mer AU and I have to say, I'm absolutely loving it :)
Your accurate ocean narratives and witty characters are really enjoyable to read, great work!

Luv this :3

The dolphin was so cute! And I was wondering when we get to see him again! And Dan had me worried there myself lol running off without notice. Also, Ember & Skulker! Yay!

I'm concerned about those tanks too. If they're depleting faster than expected, then maybe that's just the work of the Vlad-Plasmius collab! He did say that he wanted to make it seem like an accident or something along those lines when Val dies. Sly dog. Well looking forward to more updates! Sorry you lost your work though! That totally sucks and can be a real downer. Ugh, I'm upset I cant find my memory stick that has my backups on it myself! I'll have to buy more asap before something happens to my laptop (God forbid!).

So cool that we got to see ember and that Youngblood is her kid. Always thought those two had a nice potential for a family relationship. Cant wait for the next chapter!

This is really cool ! Thanks for this fic

Really liked the chapter (and you had me hanging onto my seat in the beginning hon lol)! Glad we got a lil more insight on Dan and his past! Sheesh, he made me really dislike his dad myself. I felt so bad for mom too! It was a shame how she was tortured before being shot and killed like that. Ugh!

Well it seems the 2 are at an impasse here lol. Val, dear you're gonna cave at least with the mate part. The mermaid aspect might not fly still. But we shall see! Thanks for updating! Hope to hear from ya soon!

I love this story! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Big trouble is brewing now! Poor Val is a target too...just for being Phantom's interest. Dag Plasmius couldn't just kidnap her or charm her for himself? And Jardan is different I dont mind the name. I was a bit thrown off at 1st, thinking who the heck is that?! Lol.

Anyways I like that you also separated Vlad and his ghostly side. Plus, thanks for giving us some background info on the merfolk beginnings! Update soon, ya hear?

No they’re not, Dan and Danny are the same, except Dan is a fusion of both his past ghost self and Plasmius and obvious physical appearance and age

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Oh what a surprise! Totally was not expecting Clockwork of all people to show! I was thinking that young dolphin would return to help or even Ember. Hmm jellyfish...go figure! I think it suits him.

Also you had me thinking Val was gonna seriously get hurt! I'm so glad she got a cut and not lost a limb lol. I liked the opening too. Had me kinda thrown off and in suspense for a minute there! Thank you for the update!

I was worried you forgot about this story. I love it so much. Please dont ever stop writing it.

AAAAHHHHH! I LIVE FOR THESE UPDATES! HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER IS SOON!

I thought that the Fenton parents would be pretty different, considering they're into marine mythology instead of ghosts, but I'm glad that didn't change them very much! Great story and good job!