Reviews for The ABC's of Lancaster
The Exiled Darkness chapter 13 . 12/30/2019
It’s reminders just like these that give credence to my theory that Jaune vs Tyrian will be a thing. Both have auras similar in color to the Brother Gods, both have completely opposite semblances in regards to each other, and both have their fates intertwined with a certain red caped silver eyed huntress. One to protect and support, the other to harm and destroy. Maybe I’m full of hot air, maybe not? We’ll find out eventually.
The Exiled Darkness chapter 12 . 11/15/2019
Ooh, a direct sequel to the previous story. Nice portrayal of everyone’s character. Really makes me believe that this could happen. Bless Hazel and his gentle heart. I really wish he was the gentle giant instead of Hansel.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 12 . 11/15/2019
A good chapter also I would like to see the full story look forward to more
Namah chapter 12 . 11/15/2019
I really like this... and I'm flattered that i inspired you but you've left yourself with a plot ruining hole. In the og chapter Ruby was missing and thought dead. Only Jaune kept looking for her. but heres its stablished that Sun knew ruby was alive, both taiyang, blake and weiss knew she was alive and im assuming yang knew she was alive as well; thats a completely different situation. in 5 years you mean to tell me none of them had any contact with jaune? that seems a little hard to believe, remnant has the internet after all. It seems that not even Ruby tried all that reach out to him n let him know he need not scour all of remnant looking for Ruby. When shed by this light it's hard to not feel like its a little pointless.

Sorry If I seem over negative here my opinion was mostly positive.
Fyr RedNight chapter 12 . 11/14/2019
This chapter was beautiful.
Fyr RedNight chapter 11 . 11/9/2019
I just love this collection of one-shots!
Can't wait for L!
Namah chapter 11 . 11/9/2019
I can already see chapter two of this, Jaune is understandably upset that Ruby would keep the existence of his own children from him. He spends time bonding with tem all the while Ruby tries to bridge the 5 year gap between the both of them.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 11 . 11/9/2019
Hahah that’s funny
The Exiled Darkness chapter 11 . 11/8/2019
I swear if you put L as Loss or something as equally terrible I will be upset.
The Exiled Darkness chapter 10 . 11/2/2019
Ever since his new haircut, all I can imagine is Jaune with his new hairstyle. I can’t see him with his shaggy mess anymore. :(
Sapoman chapter 9 . 10/22/2019
I hope you continue this, I cant wait to see what cuteness awaits for the rest of the chapters, even if they don't relate to what seems to have become a continuing plot.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 9 . 10/16/2019
cute chapter
The Exiled Darkness chapter 9 . 10/15/2019
That’s a nice play on the word ‘inescapable’. Plus, IronDaddy made an appearance so it’s all good too!
Sabert00thsa chapter 8 . 10/9/2019
It goes music up for last chapter but barely... I'm talking skin of your teeth! This melted me a little bit...
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 8 . 10/9/2019
this was adorable good job
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