This is a very original Gamer story I didn't know I needed! I hope you'll get back to it someday :D

i really hope you plan on continuing with this, it's the only gamer fic I've found that does justice to actual story and dialogues aside from gamer info dump.

I think you have very good quality stories ... The only problem I find is the time it takes to update them. Which leads me to ask you a question. Will you continue updating this story?
With nothing more to tell you I wish you good luck
Coordination Greetings

I hope this updates soon as I like it so far

Well shit, I hope he actually saves her regardless of how little development she had. And wipes out the syndicate or at least slaughters a lot of them.

please update immediately

bon chapitre

Great story so far!

One thing I'd recommend is using contractions in dialogue. When people speak out loud, they almost never say 'can not' or 'I will' unless they're being excessively formal. Most of your dialogue is missing contractions, which can make the dialogue a little painful to read.

Great work otherwise!

This story is a Gamer!Naruto, Gamer!Jiraiya and others.

Warning: Story contains genderbending Naruto to have sex with others.

Great story! Can't wait for more

Aww man first chapter and you already bring in the trash party system why did you say Sasuke can’t keep up knowing naruto he will 100 percent invite Sasuke to the party

First Gamer!fic that I’ve liked, so kudos. That cliff hanger is killer though. Just a tip on your grammar. People talk in contractions more than not. The way you write without any at all is also hard to read at times because it feels so fake. Not saying you should only use contractions, but try to add more of them, especially to the speech of people like Naruto who uses them more than normal.

sigue

Absolutely loving this story! Keep up the good work!

Wow umm... that was interesting Uzumaki scrolls that would tick me off too.