Well that was... Ummm...

I suppose I'd call it anticlimactic.

I mean, I liked it. Your portrayal of Blake's parents, especially her mother, were nice... It's just...

Nothing really happened.

It went pretty much exactly how I expected and then ended rather abruptly. If you take it in connection with your other story it holds up marginally better, but on its own it's... Just sorta there.

It was still cute, though, with some nice moments.

A great story, very plausible. I look forward to reading the affiliated stories.
Jay

Perfection

D'aaaawwwwww!