This fic really made my day! It was such a fun read and wonderfully written, especially for a writing exercise, it’s like you’re a pro already! all the characters, even the minor ones, had distinct personalities and I loved the very true to real life sibling interaction you snuck in there! Really this was a super cute story and I’m excited to see what else you’ll write! :)

This writing was absolutely perfect. The description and detail of it was amazing! I'm hooked! I really enjoyed the different writing style to it, and the text seemed so realistic and just awesome. Can't wait for the next update!

This is really good, I hope you do a second part!

I LOVE Patton's personality! Great writing for their relationship!

This is so gooooood! please write an end to this! I'm like really curious to what happens next!

Awww...so heartbreaking, yet so good! I loved how it went from being cute, to sad at the end, and even though my heart broke with Fanny's, that's life! Awesome story!

This is awesome and clever and witty and it was so much fun to read! I cannot wait for the second part!