Reviews for Cardinal Points
Liz Jean Tonks chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
Hey!
Obviously I had to check out this story, and, oh my god, it is so great. How could you know that my favorite scenario would have been for Luna and Harry to come together after Sirius' death? It makes so much sense to me! Why, JK, didn't you make that happen?!
Your characterization was great. I loved Luna in this, she totally acts and talks like the Luna we know from the books. The interaction between Luna and Harry was particularly nice to read. Talking of him, I liked how you included him feeling guilty about Sirius' death and all that, and how Luna helped him. She was very supportive which was nice to read. Ginny seems to be such a third wheel in the first paragraph :D
You worked in the theme very well and in spite of using three prompts, (four, if you count the Lunarry pairing coming from me) nothing seemed really forced or unnatural. Maybe the dialogue line came a little bit out of nowhere, but then again, they talked about the stars before and they just kissed, so why not. Everything else made perfect sense. Since I love the idea of those too gazing at the stars I really liked that you included this prompt. I also liked how Harry remembered this one particular constellation.
The descriptions were very nice to read, in particular the last scene. I loved reading about them kissing for the first time. You did not rush things and it seems so realistic. You drew an image so vivid I almost thought I was with Luna and Harry!
Thanks a lot for writing and posting this, I loved it a lot!
NinjaDevil2000 chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
Oh my gosh! :) that is the most beautiful Lunarry story every. It was so sweet and perfect. Lunarry is my one true pairing and you wrote it excellently. Thank you so much
Luna was kind and sweet and considerate. Harry was guilty, shy, and kind. I love these two so much.
The plot was amazing and it flowed really well. No weird breaks or anything. I also thought it was creative by going with post mystery battle instead of post hogwarts battle.
The piece about the constellations was amazing. Harry remembering the compass constellation was great and really fit with his character.
The quote at the end I thought didn't fit super great, but harry probably wouldn't have thought to much about it before saying it so it doesn't bother me now.
Stargazing was used perfectly as it really showed the connection between the two characters.
Overall,a beautiful story and I can't wait to read more from you! :)