Please no Ravenclaw or Slytherin, almost every AU I've seen has Potters sorted into those Houses. Otherwise, I look forward to seeing where you take these two Potters.

Nice chapter…Think if we see Bellatrix anytime in the future, she could beg her siblings for forgiveness after her ‘husbands’ possible death, cause if my memory is correct, she was forced into the marriage by her batshite crazy mother. Not hard to believe he put some kind of curses on him to make her loyal to him and Voldemort to do their every command, and also not hard to believe those curses would only end with his demise.

I suppose Andromeda or Lucious (read: Narcissa) would be the closest things to blood relatives he has.

Hi there.

I must say that I like this chapter. Keep up this level of work and I will keep looking forward to future chapters.

I like the idea that Harry is with his sibling and thta they aren't separated. While I enjoy the typical seperation cliche, it's nice to see something new.

Given how they have grown up, will they be in Hufflepuff? I ask this because they have shown great loyalty to each other.

Given that you have chosen to keep them as growing up together, will you keep them in the same hogwarts house? It would be a hassle to see them seperated and have to switch between characters when reading (though it is by no means a deal breaker).

If you keep them together in hogwarts, will there be a 'trio' or will it just be Harry and his sibling?

I hope you have a 'not-evil Dumbledore' in this story. It would be nice to see a good Dumbledore for once.

Anyways, my rambling is done. I look forward to the next chapter.

Cheers,
avidnarutofan

Very good story enjoyed it very much thank you for riding

Looks like the twins will not take their revenge on their relatives so not gonna follow this ff , because when you portray such abuses you make sure that those suffered give it back to those who caused it and they definitely can't be light , it doesn't even make any sense but here it looks like that which sadly is not appealing to read

Interesting so far, although I encourage you edit before publishing or to find a beta to do it for you. It’s very distracting from the story when you have lower case “i’s” when they’re supposed to be capitalized. Also, when addressing a character be it by name, nickname, insult, title, or a “you _!” You always have to add a comma either before, after, or in between the address depending on the sentence structure.

Ex: 1) “Yes, sir!” / “I really can’t do it, you bastard!”
2) “Really, sir, I understand what I have to do.” / “Hey, Katie, what are you doing this weekend?”
3) “Sir, I really advise against this!” / “My Lady, the King wishes for your company this afternoon.”

You DON’T add any commas when you’re speaking ABOUT a comma.

Anyways, I’m wondering if you’re going to put Lilith in Slytherin? I really hope so. I’m curious about the fact that she can talk to snakes as well, too, since Harry only gained the ability when a bit of Lord Noseless’s soul attached itself to his. Not because Harry is actually a descendant of Slytherin himself, despite being Moldshort’s long-removed cousin. How do you plan on explaing that? Is Lilith actually the one that ‘defeated’ dear old Tom? Though I doubt it, with the Chosen One being said to be a ‘he’ in the prophecy, so it be logical for Baldy to plan on killing the actual ‘threat’ before the ‘extra.’ Unless you’re changing the prophecy, of course, which is fine.

I’m pretty sure that the twins are going to end up with Andromeda and Ted, since there’s no in hell Dumbledore is going to allow them to stay at Malfoy’s. On a slightly different note, it’s hard to believe that so few families attempted to get their hands on the famous twins. Like, the good hearted people such as the Weasleys aside, we know that there’s a lot of frame-seeking, gold diggers, and the such from the books. It’s simply illogical that only, what, three people offered their homes? This should be a front-page gossip at the very least!

In anycase, I hope to see an update soon.