Lovely tale, and plausibly angsty for our two wonderful parents-to-be.

Considering Frank owned the Loft so Harm implied when he first moved In and was shown in series 1/2. Why not just use writers privilege and expand his loft with three bedrooms and an extra bathroom after all your story much better than some of the stories towards series 9/10. If they’d carried on without Harmon Rabb j r god forbid changed DJE in pole role ther would have been a mutiny in tv land..

Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Amazing!

Excellent writing

I hope this story is leading towards a happy ending with Harm & Mac raising two girls but I am sure you have some hurdles in their way and I am sure Sturgis is one of them. I will be looking for your next update.

Wow! Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Another great chapter. Thank you.

I guess I am curious how you are going to handle Mac finding out about this AND how the journey will go AFTER the DNA results are revealed. This has been done before BUT not with Renee being the mother and PLEASE let it be a happy ending even if the journey is a little painful but NOT to that little girl. Will look forward to your next update.

Great update!

Good story, hope that you finish it or update it soon, would like to see where things go with Harm and Charity, and how they respond to one another.

Excellent writing and I hope you keep writing it

A very touching update - I have such a soft part in my heart for Harm coming to aid of children...and it's particularly sweet when it's a little girl.

Great story can not wait to read more. Thank you.

Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Hope springs eternal, doesn’t it.