Os cara encheram tanto o saco do autor que ele desistiu

I'm not upset about chapter seven... I just skipped over it... but I hope you continue this story (unlike most other HP gamer stories) and make as frequent updates as you are able to do so.

I love the concept you have started/created here I’m looking forward to your updates and I hope that you will update soon

You know that he killed a innocent deliberately for his first horcrux reuniting his soul will not make him good

A seven year old waving a sword around that is almost as big as himself, I'm sure that's a good idea

Acting was already on 6

And here is the annoying everpresent id skill,
which by the way was something bought and not a inherent part of the gamer

Why is he nearsighted I thought he choose the glassless harry

Choose 100ft Harrison,we want to see a giant Harry climbing Big Ben with Hermione in his hand fighting a swarm of death eaters on brooms

The story itself had a lot of potential and whilst the chapters are annoyingly short, and mere moments in the storyline, what you did write was well written and structured albeit not always with the best grammer.

The problem is for this story to actually mean something other than random blurts of shit it needs to follow at least a semblance of a gaming structure each chapter. 7 and 8 did not do that.

Very few people care about author notes, comments or omake's yet it is a disease that plagues the genre of fanfics none the less.

A chapter also needs to be at the very least 1k words to convey a story properly. I know that's difficult to achieve but necessary to strive for none the less.

Time skips need to be indicated before hand. You can't just drop the story a jump to the middle of the 4th year at hogwarts when you left off at the age of 7.

O.K

I really hope you will continue posting this story.

That said, you might want to review the site's Terms of Service and community guidelines that you agreed to follow. While A/Ns appearing as PART of a posting of story text fall into something of a technical grey area, an entirely non-story chapter (formally called a "User Submission" in the ToS or an "entry" in the Guidelines) constitutes a clear violation.

From the Terms of Service, paragraph 6.E states that:
"You further agree that you will not, in connection with User Submissions, submit material that is contrary to the Community Guidelines, found at guidelines/, which may be updated from time to time, or contrary to applicable local, national, and international laws and regulations."

From the Guidelines:
"Entries not allowed:
Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc..."

Whether or not the Admins chose to deal with the notifications, such violations can be reported using the "Actions" button at the bottom of a chapter to "Report Abuse" of, in this case, "Non-story: lists, NOTES, polls, announcement, and etc." Bad grammer aside, that violation description fits this posted "chapter" perfectly. :(

Will he tell her he is sorry, or get her to take him to Andy, Teddy and Tonks?

I was getting quite into the story. Then chapter 7 happened..

It was going so welltoo. Back to the story please, as character and plot development beat crack any day (and twice on Sundays). Thanks.