I was wondering who will get lust and man this is amazing

Awesome!

This. Is. Amazing!

I liked your story, but the best part was Billy's. I could totally see him going off like that.
I don't think there's much of an age difference between Billy and Mary. He's almost fifteen, and she likely isn't eighteen yet because she's still in foster care. If this were a 17 year old guy and fourteen/fifteen year old girl, likely no one would care. No, my issue is, they are, in every way but blood, brother and sister. I might read it if you write it, but I think the Shazam Family is just that, family(and friends), and anything else, even if it happens when they are adults, is too icky for me. I would love to see more stories from you in the same vein of what you wrote here.

I love the concept of your story and I have to say, your ability to correlate the subtle faults of the brothers with the sins make you a good observer as well as a talented writer.
I also agree with you about how the design of the sins was totally unsatisfactory.
Looking forward to our other story.

Yes i would read a shazam movie fanfic with a billy and Mary pairing!.

It might be that the reason the Sins managed to get this far was because the kids are missing a Seventh champion. They got lucky this time.

And good show! Bravo.

First of all, great story! I really liked your depictions of the sins in this, and all of the varying ways they tried to conquer the heroes. I also really liked the heroes themselves. I haven't even seen the film, but I still got a good grasp of all the "siblings ", all of their strengths, weaknesses, and desires. So, great job there too!

As for your second story idea, I would love to read that too, and I hope you write it. Also, as you've pointed out to me before, long stories are easier to digest in chapters, so I hope you spill it up a bit. But I'll read it either way. Mary/Billy doesn't bother me, either. I'm...not a fan of i ncest fics, but foster siblings, especially years after they are out of living in the same house, seems different somehow. So I don't have a problem with that pairing.