| Reviews for Without You |
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   Natters chapter 6 . 12/26/2019 Good fic. More please |
| Cathy Sullins chapter 6 . 9/15/2019 Very good |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2019 A terribly written chapter. |
| Patougv chapter 5 . 7/16/2019 Good story, I hope to read the next chapters very soon. |
| Mackv34 chapter 5 . 6/28/2019 already addicted to this story! Can't wait to read more! |
| Joker Army chapter 5 . 6/23/2019 Awesome! Hopefully in knowing what’s transpired and Belial is on earth lucifer will have to return |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/15/2019 Love it |
| SailorChronos1 chapter 5 . 6/12/2019 Your choice to write the story in first person makes it a challenge to read from each perspective, but it forces readers to think, which is a good thing. I suggest paying more attention to punctuation because it's a bit jarring to find none when it's expected. I like your ideas, especially having demons continue to defy Lucifer and remain on Earth. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2019 I love it please continue |
| Cathy Sullins chapter 5 . 6/11/2019 Very good |
| veris.cullen chapter 4 . 6/10/2019 Genial! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2019 Love it keep it up |
| disneygirl112686gmail.com chapter 4 . 6/5/2019 Great story. Truth be told I just teared at the last part a bit can't wait for more |
| Joker Army chapter 4 . 6/4/2019 Aw I wonder if he’s actually hearing her praying or something or just wishing she was there |
| SPCLjmm chapter 3 . 6/4/2019 Punishment by Satan of the demons against him was long over due. They had already shown as traitors n Earth n continued to plot. |
