OHHH you haveee to continue this it's too good to not be continued,your writing is absolutely flawless and I am surpised you don't have more reviews, I would probably suggest you to edit your summary,you write soso well and it just fails to portray that,wish you the best and looking forward to more from you

This is absolutely amazing, and I loved every part of it. I really hope that you post some more chapters, this is one of the best first chapters of any Jonsa fanfics I've read.