| Reviews for Keeping the promise (BellxArtemis) |
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pix25 chapter 29 . 8/29 Beautiful chapter |
pix25 chapter 28 . 8/26 There’s not many ArtemisxBell fics out there, but this one was amazing, I feel bad for Ais but I’m sure something will work out, keep writing and proofread before updating, there are some spelling mistakes |
Mephiston75 chapter 3 . 8/17 Hmmm so wait...some common street thugs outside orario managed to beat up Bell, who at this point in the story should be at least level 2... |
NaruKarin chapter 28 . 8/10 Me pareció muy bueno y también me gustó que los personajes se desarrollaran lentamente. |
webweasel chapter 27 . 7/31 Nice chapter, though needs a spell check and a proof read. |
Dylandidi10 chapter 16 . 7/25 It's just not credible. Artemis and Hestia have been intentionally becoming goddesses of chastity for millions of years, and suddenly Artemis wonders what it would be like to kiss a man? Artemis who is happy that Hestia has found someone good, as if she has always been looking for him, it doesn't meet the codes... |
Dylandidi10 chapter 12 . 7/24 I already thought Aiz and Bell were altered, but not that much. Aiz is supposed to be innocent and know nothing about love, then I can't see her taking advantage of Bell's weakness to get close to him or come up with a plan to get a kiss... |
Dylandidi10 chapter 9 . 7/23 Bell, who just had a "little" crush on Aiz, but ended up seeing her as just a friend two months after meeting her... This little crush, as you call it, is like the origin of the most enviable skill there is. A "unique" skill that Bell has developed through Aiz and which stimulates her growth based on the strength of her feelings. How can this obsession be considered something insignificant? This is the worst justification for the BellxArtemis ship... |
Dylandidi10 chapter 5 . 7/21 It's a good thing Aiz isn't really like that, otherwise I would have shipped him off with Bete... |
webweasel chapter 26 . 7/8 Nice chapter. Watch out for "Me and person", It should be "Person and I" i.e. Hestia "Bell and I went to the park." never "Me and Bell went to the park." |
Shin Hyo Joon chapter 26 . 7/7 Thanks for the story! i would love to see the funny moment when Artemis and Ais going all out for Bell attention. i will love ~ good one author-nim~ |
Shin Hyo Joon chapter 25 . 7/5 This is so refreshing actually to see their relationship build from Zero. Also a jealous Artemis would be cute. I mean, Right now she is really comfortable around him and if suddenly Ais come and claim Bell, she will feel jealous and maybe become a bit Tsundere. hahaha i love this story. You make my day. |
webweasel chapter 25 . 7/5 Good chapter. Watch out for the word quiet, as you always write quite. |
Shin Hyo Joon chapter 24 . 6/29 Wow that plot twist Artemis is a mortal right now. i got me there to think she will become a normal human. this is getting more interesting. |
webweasel chapter 23 . 6/23 Just read the entire thing. Really nice story. I'm enjoying it. Please continue and thank you for your time and effort |