Reviews for In the Shadows
NazgulBelserion chapter 33 . 7/29
I still feel bad for him looking like Moria and being an old man
NazgulBelserion chapter 24 . 7/29
I keep seeing Kenji is he gonna like take kenjis body it's younger and the fruit comes with him lol
NazgulBelserion chapter 15 . 7/29
You know I'd love a Doffy Self insert right after he ate DF and ofc he has to be Evil we don't deal with pussy fix it heroes
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 7/29
I hope he can change he's body cause that shits gross lol
Kulha chapter 33 . 7/27
Would be cool if Moria got a few ladies to show his 'will of D' to. Asexual MCs are fine in a Shounen show, but I think that you're trying to portray it more realistically.
ujay27 chapter 33 . 7/25
Learning from shadow is good idea. Find some pic of thin moriah on google image, maybe we can get some small timeskip with power up and less fat Gecko moriah.
ujay27 chapter 28 . 7/25
Really good story, thanks for the chapter
Greatazuredragon chapter 33 . 7/25
I like the father-daughter dynamic between Moria and Perona, specially since Perona is by no means a pure angel. She is but a villain that recognizes the power of moe. ;p
Nice chapter, good work
Jajo Camello chapter 33 . 7/25
I agree with CrowKrowQrow's comment about this chapter, hope you continue with this story.
CrowKrowQrow chapter 33 . 7/25
Yo, great chapter. Nice slight development of all the relations there (Golass and Kenji developing friendship, El Drago constant greed, Kenji's developing Stockholm Syndrome and Perona's further accepting her daddy issues),

Nice to include some leftovers of Moria actions still having an impact, and nice to see the minor but supposedly world wide important (like Giberson) to be used. And he seemed like the drunk, arrogant, kinda annoying character that he gives the impression of in his short canon appearence.

Eh, the torture and concubine doubt was a realistic progression of the MC's actions, still feels weird to cheer the "hmm, should I rape this girl I'm torturing" type of character. The "Evil dad with a daughter of gold" trope you mentioned is used exactly to humanize the type of character that would have that line of thought as it's a realistic emotional weakness to have and humanizes the character.
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 32 . 7/11
I think it would be awesome if Moria has the blind fishman and this mystery sniper woman join his crew rather than using their shadows for more mindless Zombie corpses, looks like Moria hit the jackpot though, both of his prisoners are capable of using Haki.
AO Black chapter 4 . 7/9
If he doesn't steal from the Straw Hats nest time he meets them, I'll be disappointed. Maybe use the Shadow porting ability he discovered.
ankitmahat chapter 11 . 7/8
This chapter was well written in a sense, I can't complain about that. But it was also completely unnecessary and broke the immersion.
Redery chapter 20 . 7/7
That's actually a brilliant idea
Redery chapter 4 . 7/7
What's he gonna do about the ppl living on his island? Strawhats not meeting them also means Nami doesn't have Big Moms card.
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