Loved his reaction at the end!

It's been a lovely story

I loved this story! Looking forward to reading the new stuff.

I will miss this story. Thanks for the epilogue and the home and Hope and Emma and Killian so blissfully happy. It was wonderful, from beginning to end. Looking forward to whatever you write next. Stay well.

I wasn't sure what to expect with the title of Gray. That's not something I usually think of with good things. But it is indeed a good thing in this chapter. Lol Killian was so excited. Such a happy chapter, and a perfect glimpse of their future. I would have some doubts too if I was Killian, a few centuries is a lot to deal with and the future can seem too good to be true, but we know that everything is gonna be just fine. Thanks for this story! It was the best, and I really enjoyed seeing this AU tale unfold. I am looking forward to the next one!

Congrats on finishing this story! And looking forward to the new one! The synopsis seems interesting! I am guessing it’s cursed Killian?

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I probably didn’t read very clearly but what was the ending of Gold story in this one?

I wanted to wait for the end to review this! I love this story. Nicely paced. Mystery believable and characters written well. Loved each update and now that it is complete I will reread and love it all over again. Hooked (ha pun) on this from the beginning!

great chapter!

I enjoyed the house hunting, and Henry being included too. And yeah, a nice house like they have on the show would cost a lot I'd imagine. It is bittersweet to move out, and David and Mary Margaret each have their moments in this chapter. But it's for the best. It's nice having family close by. I got to say though, Gold gets major points in this chapter. He may not be a good guy, but it's still something. And the naming ceremony thing, I didn't know how it would go. But I absolutely love what you did. I can't believe this is almost over, but it has been wonderful.

Lovely. The house, Gold’s gift without a price, Henry’s happiness, the name of David and MM’s son, all lovely and thoughtful aspects to a great story. This is a great chapter as Emma and Killian begin their life together and as the story wraps up. Thanks for writing.

Killian is amazing. He has handled so much that has happened so quickly and with a positive hopeful outlook. Including the threat of death and the loss of his hand, he is positive and supportive. I have enjoyed his relationship with Emma throughout the story.

Very glad to see Zelena defeated! Thanks for the chapter.

Thank you for this chapter. I don't think it gets better than this. I'm so happy, relieved, and excited. It may not be how Killian imagined his first day of being mortal, but it is the start of new and better things. I really think everything happened as well as it could (baby brother is fine, family is together, and Killian is okay and accepting of what happened) and good is coming from it. I love that Killian is happy, and even draws the connection yo Captain Hook, when he could easily be the opposite after what happened. His past is different though, and his true love is beside him. Both of them are so in love. Thanks so much for this chapter! It's a good, happy refresher.

This made me cry.
During such a scary time in the real world, i found this chapter to be a rather huge emotional rollercoaster.

I hadn’t realized about Killian! Another shock to end another chapter! I don’t want to give it away in a review, but Wow! Big surprise. This was excellent, thanks for continuing.

I was sort of dreading this chapter once I remembered the circumstances where this was picking up. I was expecting the worst and I wasn't getting my hopes up. I can't tell you how relieved I was, and then I enjoyed things so much. That was cutting it close, but I'm thankful it happened this way and we didn't have to deal with the Underworld. Then I thought he would still die when Gold went after Emma. I guess some things, however terrible, will happen no matter what. Or maybe modern medical attention can help with his hand. This chapter was a rollercoaster! Still I'm glad for the update, it's a Thursday highlight.

*flails* *screams* *flails some more*