*blink*

Ohhhh boy this is gonna get PHYSICAL.

Wow, THAT is a tack I've not seen before! I'm outright enthralled so far, and I'm eager to read more!

This fic is certainly very interesting. I wonder what you have in store.

Well, we're going to learn a lot in the next chapter. For good, and bad.

I'll be waiting on that, since I hate to judge with so little to work with. But I will say you have my interest, if only to see Queen Authenticator.

I can't wait to see what happens next

Seems kinda like Yang's semblance from RWBY. Wonder how far Taylor's damage absorption can take her and what she'd be immune to. Looking forward to seeing more

By the way, I agree about length of shard interaction. Not sure, but maaayybe it would be better if it was moved further down the story.
Also, Taylor DOES have her reasons to hate Lung here, but as for Lisa - after hearing her just confirming that she stolen from him and flaunts it saying that he doesn't have right to be upset feels hypocritic. ;)

I hope this is not straight-up Flying Brick. Or staright rip-off of Madcap's power either.
Her voice feels right, though.

man... gotta hate those momments when things are escalating and the the narrator says:till the next episode of...

this is awesome :D

Soo, she was changed into a new type of entity?

Ah...… there is a LARGE timeline question here, the original cannon fight with Lung was 3 MONTHS After the locker. Are you going with the locker never happening and if so why didn't the trio do that or something else that level? The robbery was only a few days before skitter went out for the first time if not just the day before, if your wondering why I'm questioning the timeline. Otherwise I am eager to see where your going with the story.

thanks for another worm story. you have a good start

Nice new take on the shards. Very interesting story

I liked the story before, but the changes are an improvement.

Can't wait for more!

So far I like the power can't wait to see what else it does