Oh man. That first chapter was intense. I was on the edge of the seat lol but I’m glad everything worked out! If there are more updates in the works, then I can’t wait to read them!

"You and I might not see eye to eye but both our hearts belong to her and that's enough..." I adored this line! Loved the flashforward too. Beautiful

This is incredible! I loved the first chapter when I first read it and always wanted a second part to it! The first part was so captivating, I couldn’t take my eyes away but the second part was just that beautiful happy closure we all needed haha, especially loved the flash forward to their grown lil girl! Thank u so much for writing!

Aww I love that you named their baby girl Lana!

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you so much for sharing this, I loved it!

Love it!

That 'Guest' who wrote last really has no idea what they are talking about. They have commented twice on your work and seems to be singling you out when your work is better then some that are on here. To me it seems they are just trying to be mean and critical. If you find it boring guest, well dont read it.

Dont listen to them. People obviously like your stories. Keep writing. And please return to upside down and continue that story.

It wasn't boring at all. What a sweet ending, thank you so much!

This was anticlimactic and quite boring, sorry. I expected more and feel let down because we had to wait so long. Maybe you still don’t enjoy writing so you shouldn’t write because I had to read it in two goes not to fall asleep. I liked chapter 1 of smothered, read upside and didn’t like it, read this and didn’t like it. Maybe writing isn’t a skill you’ve got, it’s not for everyone

I TOTALLY KNEW it

It's great

Omg you have no idea how much I loved it. You’re writing is so good, and I’m really glad you decided to give us a second chapter.
Thank you!
Please, never doubt your ability to write, you’re awesome!

You know how I feel about this story. But I’m gonna say it again, this is the perfect balance of angst - hurt/comfort - romance and fluff all wrapped up into a beautiful chapter that had me tearing up more that once. You write domestic/family life darvey so authentically it’s almost scary (in a good way). Love this, but that’s no surprise because I love all your stuff xx

Looooove this, you’re such a talenter writer! This fanfic reminded me of why i love angst so much. Masterpiece.

Far be it from me when I have no talent for writing to tell an author what to do but PLEASE, Jess write another chapter! Maybe more?

It’s 4am in the UK and having woken up I thought I’d finish your story and drop off again. Then BOOM...Donna’s pregnant. To paraphrase a line from Donna “I should’ve seen it coming” but I didn’t. Maybe it’s sleep deprivation. I am now wide awake as the angst kicked in.

Your story gripped me from start to finish...but I really hope it’s not finished. This one has legs, Jess.

Thanks for writing and sharing your talent x