The set up is better now. All we can hope for now is a new chapter.

Well I thoroughly enjoyed that, I just hope I don't have to wait long for the next update.

yes! finally the talked. look forward for more

Loving the story so far, can’t wait for more!

After weeks if not months of going over a plan to help Tenten with out giving it away they he was in the sword just has a bad case of word vomit LOL Don't know if it was planed or not but i got a lot of humor out of that first meeting

Glad the Tenten had the natural reaction anyone would have if an inanimate object suddenly started talking to you

You putting to much background story than the actual story, which drive most readers away

Great story, by you should combine chapter one to eight into a single chapter

Great chapter. I actually laughed out loud with the battery joke.

Flow was good, didn't notice any glaring issues. good job.

Maybe you should just make narutos/their chakra gold, apparently that's naruto canon/manga chakra color and it's cooler, plus this is naruto and kyuubi working together so it makes even more sense.

Oh god, it’s happening!

Tenten thinking a lot before reacting to Kurama, shes so smart.

I’m looking so forward to see their dinamic

Yea...I'm waiting for the next chapter. You dragged it out long enough for them to reunite.

Oh, i love it!

I’m really looking forwad to see how Naruto, Kurama and Tenten will make this happen. And how much Ten will grow up as a ninja.

looking forward to the next one

Well this is one hell of an idea!
I can't wait to see what you do with this.