I really love your story, though I kinda am annoyed with Magnus cause it seems like harry is always trying to do stuff or follow what Magnus wants, to keep him happy so I would really like to see a chapter where harry gets angry at Magnus, plus a chapter where Magnus is chasing harry please, anyway I love everything else about your story can't waiting for your next update

I can barely understand what it is that I am reading, the spelling is equal to that of a 3 year old, lets not even talk about the grammar. Did you even bother to proof read before submitting this. Get yourself a Beta that can read and write queens english.

Ficou legal demais, vc ja tentou fazer um capitulo da fic os guardiões da galáxia, sendo o Harry o Peter Quill e o Magnus serio o Drax. seria demais.

gostei muito, se alguem adotar esse capitulo para continuar, vc por favor me avise para que eu possa favoritar e continuar a ler, sou viciado em xmen.

very interesting chapter and I can see the similarities in the speech between Harry and Senator Kelly in your story and Jean Grey and Kelly in Tricktsters and Gods by sakurademonalchemist

Gostei muito, gostaria que você fizesse uma versão dos X-Men.

What about Kuroko no basket, underworld, and black panther?