I absolutely loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter. oh and graphic violence usually means that it is described so well people can imagine exactly what is happening as they read it

Why would Harry run? He shouldn't of expected them to attack him since he saw Mrs. Figg with them.

So Harry is a criminal now? How is going to go about this? Will he kill Tom and leave Britain? Will he go to dark lord and conquer it? Destroy the Ministry?

Plz update this I love this

Bad ... Not the worst.. But still bad..

Wow brilliant love it keep up with your fantastic story. Love that Harry is getting his payback all all the gits who betrayed hun. What's going to happen to Hedwig ? Hears a thought for you if you don't mind ? He goes to get her back after kicking arse of who keept her away from him and after that death turns her to a dark Phoenix as one of her gifts what do you think ? Anyway just a thought. As for the M rating depends if your going to more blood and guts and lemons ( Hope so lol ) but I would say yes just to be safe.
Looking forward to reading your next chapter hopefully not to long to come ?.

hope to read more.

I loved Harry's escape

Here's hoping Hermione doesn't drink the koolaid. She might be able to keep him from becoming a Spiderman 3, Tobey McGuire level cringelord.

like this, cant wait for more. im wondering about ron and granger?

Nice story, really liking it so far and yes if you going to have any kind of graphic violence, excessive swearing or swearing at all and any other mature theme the rating should be set to M
Only thing that bothers me a little is death or rather the deal with death
Its way too onesided
I get that Harry has nothing death wants seeing as all souls end up going to her anyway but still remember the gifts she gave the brothers they ended up killing them
I guess this is more like her giving tools to Harry so he can accomplish what she needs him to
Still if ya ask me change the Voldemort part of that deal
Pretty sure there are other immortals in the HP world too e.g the Flamels theyre not evil but they too refuse to come to deaths realm as you put it
Or after this is done you can make a spin off series of Harry getting sent or reincarnated to other worlds as agent of death doing her bidding and all that
Thats your choice tho Im just putting the idea forth
Anyways keep up the good job and see ya next chapter

Interesting storyline with lots of promise. Hope to see more soon.

I like that even the Shadow realms what Voldermort to pay for his crimes

Quite a strange day for Harry. Thanks for sharing!

Interesting first chapter and thanks for sharing!

nice so far