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Just so happy to have a new story to read . I wish you were out there somewhere and come back !

I wish this story never ended

New fan here . I just fell in love with your story . Have you ever thought of coming back ? So many authors have returned to keep Harry Potter alive for all of us

Hi, authoress, if you're still here sometimes.
It is a gripping, powerful story.
I left some passionate reviews for you on Potions and Snitches on P&S if it gets erased here on ffnet.
I love this story,
What about the power jewels?, Is harry a baby-druid?
Will lady Av. give Umbridge a roasting with some self- insight? Yes, do not rewrite all this year but keep , as others begged for, keep Umbridge and write your own version...
Will Ron grow to like Malfoy, when he is bought to understand what Sensitve is?... Perhaps Malfoy scrying him and seeing the second-hand feeling Ron suffers under. will playing Chess together with him, pranking Sev in fellowship, or Saving Herms from spiteful ..girls, bullies, teachers,,.. or reading exhaustion. Please do not abandon it and us without hope in outermost Thule. It is too good not to finish. Thank you so much and best regards.

Very interesting story.

Good

I found this fic recently and couldn't stop reading it until I got to this last chapter. I hope that you decide to continue it weather it means you change some of it or not. It's an interesting take on the Snape is Harry's father plot and I love your Arabella Figg!

Thoroughly enjoying this story...

Hope life allows you to update sometime

Keep writing as life allows

It's OK.

(sigh) Poor Darrius hope you update someday soon :D I adore this story!

Please finish the story!

ITS BEEN YEARS!

I think I know what's wrong, This story has now come almost to closure, I believe that Darrius and Livia should not be in their 5 year again, they should have stayed 11/12 or even 14 just they shouldn't have gone into the same year. I don't believe the Weasleys at least the younger ones should know who the snape twins are, this will allow more room for movement with Ron's character.

At the very least Livia and Darrius should be shorted into houses separate from Gryffindor.

I hope this feeds your muse and helps you update soon :)

FP15

I found this story late in the game (as they say), but despite that, and despite having read this after already reading the canon version of events (is that version of Severus' past what you'd like to work in?)...I really, really would love to see where you take the rest of *this* story.

I've very rarely come across a story that works in, if not an OC, then a drastically different version of a canon character, and manages to make that character both engaging and interesting... in other words, your version of Arabella Figg is fascinating, and SO much more satisfying than JKR's version! The plot is fantastically woven - just close enough to canon to be familiar, but also refreshingly, creatively different. Tht little bit of unfamiliarity lends an edge to the story that I find quite engaging. And even though it's a different version of events after the Third Task, the characters: Severus, Harry, Hermione et al, are still recognizable, and true to how I think they WOULD act if this were the way things played out. I can't remember who said it first, but this story is like "the other leg down the tight jeans of time", even with as 'unbelievable' a concept as Harry being Severus' son. :)

So then, I hope that this review finds you well and might give your muses a kick-start. ;) I certainly wouldn't complain if another update found its way online soon... Until then, great work! I've very much enjoyed reading this so far, and I look forward to any and all updates! Thanks for sharing!