| Reviews for An Unbeating Heart |
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Starpottergeek chapter 35 . 7/9 Where is the sequel |
Starpottergeek chapter 35 . 5/31 Can’t wait for the sequel |
Starpottergeek chapter 35 . 4/29 you should have it be pike finding out about the vampires when he first arrives on discovery then going to bloodstone to pick up burham |
Albertspeer11 chapter 35 . 4/16 Know I really hope Gant survives |
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 35 . 4/15 while i love the story im hoping you are not panning on making pike burnhams mate it just doesnt seem to fit them ill keep reading either way |
Starpottergeek chapter 35 . 4/15 Good story can’t wait for the next chapter |
AlbertSpeer134 chapter 24 . 4/11 Please update this is an awesome story |
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 24 . 3/17 interesting |
Starpottergeek chapter 23 . 2/5 update please |
thesecret21 chapter 20 . 12/7/2019 I've missed this story so much. Poor Michael hopefully she can eat soon. Yeah phillipa is here! Cant wait for the next chapter. |
thesecret21 chapter 19 . 10/30/2019 Yeah so happy for a new chapter! I adore this story its something so different yet of course so familiar. Cant wait for the next chapter. Love Michael's struggle with slowing down and having to show restraint btw. Keep up the great work :-) |
PI chapter 15 . 9/14/2019 Since Cornwell was able to survive well enough in the series, why can't i shake the feeling that her being turned is key to another major divergence? Keep it up, story sounds very good. |
WildChild2014 chapter 1 . 7/16/2019 It's die of "asphyxiation" - not affiliation. It's really, really hard to die of affiliation. Someone might kill you for it. But affiliation itself won't kill you. |
amerdism chapter 7 . 6/21/2019 Seems pretty stupid of burnham to give her venom to someone even for study, I would think she’d know better. Also I think it’s more interesting with her as the only vampire in the story or at least active in starfleet and on the ship, it feels like it gives her a new kind of flavour, if that makes sense and turning someone else just seems like it’d take that away. It’d be interesting if only certain being could be turned into vampires though, like a kind of natural selection thing, and the vampires are able to sense candidates, you know, an extra twist, that helps explain why there are or aren’t so many vampires around, also I find it a bit hard to believe that starfleet would be so irresponsible to allow other vampires to turn humans or otherwise into vampires themselves without some supervision. Though, personally I would find it interesting if in the future burnham and the vampires set up their own government and system for themselves cause as they are right now they’re at the whims of humanities government without their own representation legal wise. |
amerdism chapter 5 . 6/4/2019 Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up? Will Burnham actually address that she’s accused as the person to start the war with the Klingons in this story? I’m curious, from what I’ve seen, the accusations that she started the war in canon are false in their entirety as the Klingons opened hostilities. Her killing T’kuvma could be said to have helped continue the war as she martyred him, but the Klingons fires first with no provocation. I’d also like to say that I love how you’ve altered the normal idea of what makes a vampire to make Burnham into a sci-finvampire instead of the classic, sunlight burning, flesh and blood vampire. It’ll be interesting to see if she has additional abilities and changes unlike traditional vampires. |