Very, very lovely indeed3 Definetly worth the wait

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This is a read that is totally worth the wait :)

I can't wait to see the next chapter buddy

Just a heads up, whenever a new person speaks you're supposed to start a new paragraph.

For example:

"Wow, this place is amazing." Mike awes.

"Yes, it truly is." Dakota replied.

See what I mean? This will help your stories to be less condensed and easier to read.

Nice. Nice job dude.