| Reviews for Sacrifice |
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Guest chapter 14 . 8/6 Love this story! So emotionally beautiful |
Anne Bensler chapter 14 . 11/5/2019 Thank you so much for revisiting Dickie! It was very moving to read about how he's dealing with everything. A beautiful ending to an emotional journey for our favorite Detectives, and Dickie. Thanks for writing and sharing this with us! |
Anne Bensler chapter 13 . 11/4/2019 Yes, that was inevitable. You've been leading us to this all along. I really wanted to finish reading this story to see where you'd take them and I love their new house! It's easy to picture them living there, and it reminds me a little of the house I gave to Peter Stone and Olivia in my story "Someone like me". I have to say that you keep adding little details in the story that I would never think of including (not that it's a bad thing, mind you; it's just different). Example: there were not forks with the delivered food. I mean ... you know? I think all those tiny details describing exactly what people do throughout the day make up for a large portion of your extremely long chapters. I really want to read your stories because I like your ideas but the length of the chapters still makes me pause. Just some honest feedback here about the form; obviously I love the content! On to the epilogue now. |
Anne Bensler chapter 12 . 10/24/2019 Well well. I'm beginning to think you are going to have Elliot exit the force so Nick Amaro can come in, but El will be Olivia's SO waiting for her at home. I'm here for it! |
Amaziah0531 chapter 1 . 10/17/2019 This prologue is very well written. The last paragraph is universal. |
Anne Bensler chapter 11 . 10/14/2019 Wow, there's almost too much in this one chapter to comment on. Dickie moved me several times. I'm very surprised Elliot and Olivia haven't engaged in any heavy makeout sessions yet! I mean, sharing a bed for several nights and it's still all just cuddling and pecks on the lips? I commend Elliot's restraint there :)) A date is required though, I agree. Just one. Then it's a go, right? |
nicole.richard.10 chapter 4 . 10/3/2019 I really like this fic so far. I'm only on chapter 4 and i've already cried like a baby. BUT since I work in a hospital blood bank, I thought I would let you know... When Olivia needed blood the doctor said they were out of A pos units... A pos patients can receive A neg, O pos, and O neg. |
Anne Bensler chapter 10 . 9/25/2019 A toddler losing interest in playing with adults with his toys? That would be a first ... And falling asleep after waking up to not one but two adults he adores? I don't know about your kids, but mine would have been unstoppable! :D Dickie is a sweetheart. It will take me some time to work through these huge, detail-filled chapters of yours, but I intend to finish reading this story one day! ;) |
poetif chapter 2 . 8/12/2019 I was with u until... Langon declared his client guilty. in front of the cops. Elliot offered money and a car without any demands. Why is Tucker there? Why doesn't he carry a gun? |
poetif chapter 1 . 8/12/2019 What an awesomely descriptive yet sad start. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20/2019 Love the story! You should do a sequel. :) |
Anne Bensler chapter 9 . 7/17/2019 Well well, so much kissing. I'm trying very hard to get used to this meek version of Olivia. She's different since the shooting but maybe that's natural. I'm glad she got through to Kathy. |
Anne Bensler chapter 8 . 7/15/2019 Slowly but surely. :) |
Anne Bensler chapter 7 . 7/15/2019 Oh my. She was doing so well and the Stabler kids are being so sweet. Does she have pneumonia? |
Anne Bensler chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 Glad she's awake and back home. I hope she will remember her time in limbo at some point. It seems like such a waste if she never remembers it. |