You don't know how much noticing a new chapter just made my day :)
Parts of this were beautifully poetic. I am excited to see more of the other conversation soon and maybe some more Roy and Ed.
Hope all is well, and thank you so much for cheering up a real miserable day for this tired hospital worker.

Great chapter, as always. Can't wait for the next one!

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This chapter got me. And MAES?! We get to see MAES?! *flips table* I am SO HERE FOR IT.

I’m really sad I caught up and got to the end, but I eagerly await your next update! I’m super pumped for it, this is the kind of angst I need in my life lol.

You can do it, Edo! You got this!

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. So beautiful, and their relationship, and I’m not crying, you’re crying ;v;

UGH you wrote Winry SO WELL.

SO WELL.

Like everyone else, brilliantly in character, just fantastic.

I liked the thing about him having the surgery twice and Winry tearing doctors a new one. It’s perfect

Poor Ed ;_;

But the cereal thing cracked me up lol xD

That automail scene, by the way, hurt my heart. Like, how he pranked Mustang, and the it didn’t work and it hurt him and I was emotionally devastated.

That line about the mirror and pieces on the floor...that one got me ;-; Like, I’ve been thinking about that line for days now.

My heart is BREAKING how could you, I mean, I’m totally okay with it xD Ugh, that shower scene got me ;n;

You’ve done such a great job with Al, too, and the AU you’ve established. I buy it, 100%.

Also, DO NOT APOLOGIZE FOR ENGLISH NOT BEING YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE, you are KILLING IT. I wish I could read/write in another language half as good as you. Mad props. I’ve only seen a handful of grammatical/word substitution errors, and English speakers do that all the freaking time (because English is ridiculous xD). Seriously, you’re rocking this.

Riza is the the real MVP. Look at her go

You’ve done a freaking fantastic job of keeping Ed true to character, despite going through something that is super traumatic and damaging, and Mustang is also brilliantly written.