Reviews for Dannymay Shorts
neokid93 chapter 50 . 6/25
I love this one! I really like your take on how Danny could become an ancient and the process of it. That Clockwork would be familiar to him still. That he became ancient through the passage of time on his own. He never would have agreed if he had known. And clockwork would know the best day to take him for him to have that goodbye. It must have hurt to know that Danny was calling and begging him throughout. It may be for the greater good, but it would still hurt. This is going to live in my head for a very long time. 4th time trying to post this review, ff is giving me difficulties.
SpacePortals chapter 59 . 6/22
I love your work 33333
Cyan Quartz chapter 59 . 5/31
Much coolness attributed to your series of annual writings.
17 chapter 59 . 5/30
Aaawww! Im sad its over! I hope we get more of that clone sibling arc! I liked it! Cant wait for whats next!
Black Cat chapter 57 . 5/30
Aw, it's always nice to see Vlad being nice. Spending hours thawing out poor Danny. Curious ending. Perhaps the scare magnified Danny's child ghost instincts for protection? Vlad would just love that.
ellameno chapter 59 . 5/31
honestly these were all SO GOOD. you characterize everyone so well. and you’re a great writer on top of it. such great ideas! i hope you might expand on some :)
aquestionableprecence chapter 59 . 5/31
Hilarious. I love it! Thanks for writing.
Little Kunai chapter 59 . 5/30
What a bunch of brats. And this is why monopoly causes grudges between family and friends. Lol
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 59 . 5/30
Haha this is funny. The sibling bonding. the rivalry. Dan telling everyone Danny was cheating. Love it!
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 58 . 5/30
I'm so happy you continued Mask. I feel so bad for Danny. He's tired and being manipulated but I'm so happy the clones are being stabilized and love the cute sibling moments. And I get why they're trying to convince Danny to stay, since Vlad's not giving them the whole picture. I'm wondering what exactly Danny managed to tell Jazz.
ShadowPillow chapter 57 . 5/30
Seriously, I have to say, all of these have been awesome. I've really been enjoying reading them every day. They're all somehow new and interesting – the ghost ice molecular structure was also especially interesting to me (wondering if ectoplasm induces some strange charge polarity effects that overrides the h-bonds of water that create the typical ring H2o structure for ice? It's cool stuff to speculate about). And moreover, the character bonding, yes. Vlad saving Danny is quite a peculiar situation to be in, but I can understand his motives loud and clear. I understand that. It's good stuff. So seriously, thanks for writing all this; you have one dedicated reader here.
ReflectiveReader chapter 57 . 5/30
Short is fine, it's still a good chapter.
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 57 . 5/30
Well I'm glad Danny got thawed, even if Vlad will probably using it to his advantage.
Black Cat chapter 55 . 5/28
Ooh, twist! Here I was focused on what they were going to do with Danny, and now they have evidence against Vlad! It's always heartwarming when the ghosts do things for Danny, even when it is for their own agendas.
The timeline was just a little confusing. Did the ghosts get into Vlad's place when he left for the police station? It wasn't 100% clear which part came first. But that seems to be what you're implying.
I'd love to see what comes of this if you write another part tomorrow!
Cyan Quartz chapter 56 . 5/29
Wait, I'm confused. People are still visiting after the funeral? Who even showed up for it in the first place, besides a priest or whoever? Like, who did they think the funeral was for? If they thought it was Phantom, the GIW would swoop right in for that body like vultures. If it was an unknown body, wouldn't it have gone to a mortuary, or wherever unclaimed bodies go? I feel like people wouldn't keep coming days later if no one knew who it was. Well, except the police who were in on it.
I also just realized Danny would end up being buried twice. Not a question, just an observation.
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