Reviews for Coming Home
ThaliaGrace6077 chapter 3 . 5/2
I need more chapters!
DemigodSassReaders chapter 3 . 12/21/2019
Absolutely love itttt! Can't wait for the next chapter!
BethnPercy chapter 3 . 12/3/2019
Aw this was cute and I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
BookReader03 chapter 3 . 12/3/2019
This is honestly one of the most amazingly written fan fictions I have ever read. I was quite literally brought to tears by it. Not many stories will do that to me so I applaud you. I can’t wait to see where this story goes!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2019
This is honestly the saddest fanfic I have EVER read. Especially the 2nd chapter I mean how Jason died and left piper alone alone it was unbearable I swear I cried while reading the whole chapter lol it made me realize how much we need to respect the military and the people who fought for us it really did so thank you. This was a really amazing story I really do hope you add more to it this story touched me.
Charlee56 chapter 2 . 5/9/2019
Another baby? ARRANGE IT! ARRANGE IT!
ZebraGirl202 chapter 2 . 5/9/2019
This is realyyyyy good!
BethnPercy chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
Aw this is so sweet and I can't wait for more and to read as Percy copes with being home and having a daughter. I think you wrote the whole PTSD and new daughter scenes very well because as a soldier and being gone for 2 years does something to you. Not to mention coming home to a kid who doesn't even know you. I love your writing and can't wait for more, please update soon. Your girl BethnPercy signing off
Charlee56 chapter 1 . 5/1/2019
Great start! The bssic "alt reality" stuff is going good and I like the angst elements; they're really real. I remember mustering out in 1978. It wasn't wartime, but soldiers, especially airborne soldiers always get sent in first.
I'd been involved in very "large scale troop movements" that later turned out to not be such "troop movements" as they were warnings to the old Soviet Union. And in those days, that was some serious stuff.
After awhile of "living on the edge", our psyches would begin to get a bit bruised. Steapping on a heavy pack, jumping into theatre by 'chute could be really hairy stuff all by itself. Never mind the shooting part, but just making it down in one piece is difficult enough!
I can really empathize with any veteran coming home from combat. And Percy is behaving reasonably convincing here.
Hi Im Manu chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
really sweet. I love it.
nihal27 chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
Loved it. Keep up the good work.