No more E rated stuff? aww

Obvious discomfort aside I thought your explicit content was rather tastefully done. Great chapter as always. I can’t wait for Obito to heal and hopefully handle his feelings better, he’s been my favorite Naruto character for awhile and this period in his life never gets enough spotlight.

Good chapter man! And congratulations obito kakashi’’s dick will be burned in your brain forever. The only way to probably erase it may be from a certain redhead.

Also if that was your first time writing a lemon I can give some advice on work on that, if you want.

So Obito twice choose to just randomly commit crimes(blackmail and kidnapping) I hope he know that this will all spill over on Pyrrha, and he probably just cost Pyrrha, any remaining possibility of making up with team RWBY, because considering Pyrrha support Obito, and tried to help him kill Kakashi, his bad behavior absolutely spill over on her, if he keep acting like that, Pyrrha is likely to become a pariah by associating with him.

The sexual content was actually good, short and funny. I just hope Obito didn't have his Sharingan activated at that moment or else he will never forget it.
Till next time.

Smut is good and if you write more it comes easier

this is good... and lol for the last one

it just keeps getting better and better

I fucking love this fanfic. Every time obito interact with peaple it's either funny or terrific or ankward. One of the best cross over on this site.

Obito can be fun ưhen the time comes... was he not Tobi?

yup i feel luke this kind of story is better with out total smut. good try tho. Overall great story, thank you for your hard work.

her nature. he her very semblance.
she was a naturally protect protective person.
or "she is naturally protective person"

This felt a tad rushed, though I couldn't point out any specific reason why. And yes, I would agree that implying things of sexual nature of occurring rather than outright tell us is probably a better route to take, especially if it makes you uncomfortable to write.

Good work! I had thought as much. Despite (somewhat) reconciling, there will always be a hidden tension between Obito and Kakashi. Also, I had to laugh at how Obito deliberately left Jaune on the top of Beacon Tower. Lol. Poor guy.

And the part where Obito interrupted Kakashi’s and Yang’s "moment"? I bet he was even redder than Blake would’ve been if SHE stumbled upon the two!

In any case, it also seems that Ruby has a bit to deal with as well. Simply for being someone Kakashi cares for... and he made her CRY! Poor Rubes. I sniffled a bit at that...

I really liked it, not in a perverted way, but in the way Obito was scarred for life again. What sucks even more is that his Sharringan was active when he went through the door so he had that image burned into his memory permanently.