Gods I loved your story, I've always felt that mycroft deserved more love, he takes care of protecting his brother at all costs. Gods I loved your story, I've always felt that mycroft deserved more love, he takes care of protecting his brother at all costs. I really loved the story. ️

really good. loved it alot

Hello. Just finished reading your story. It is a very interesting premise: Mycroft's secret wife comes to light during the Sherinford crisis.
I like how you wanted to show in the story how much Mycroft loves Nora, though his methods are somehow...not good, as John would say. However, his overprotectiveness would be better explained with a deeper exploration of either some real danger directed specifically towards her or the missions she went.

Also, you tend to change settings without any separation on the text (a dotted line, e.g.) and it's hard to follow it, since one keeps reading the next paragraph and suddenly finds that it is about something else. It would help too if you wrote who is talking certain lines. On the wedding, for example, one can only identify the speaker of the vows at the very end.

So, overall a good story, that can be improved to be really exciting.

Thank you my dear for your so honest note regarding the Holmes parents interaction with Mycroft. I was apalled by that, to say the least.
Thank you also for pointing out how absurd is Sherlock's desire to interact with Eurus after all that happened. I mean, she tried to kill him, his best friend, killed over a dozen people and deserves help. Mycroft walks the tenth mile for Sherlock's well being and is the archenemy?
Anyway...love how Nora put the parents straight. Major applause here. I'm really enjoying this story.

I absolutely loved this story! The characters were awesome and I really enjoyed the sweet ending. I can't wait to read more of the stories that you have.

Well done.

Awww!That was beautiful! w I really did not expect a story from Sherlock, I read almost all your stories and I love them all, this is not the exception.
In fact, it was this story that made me see Sherlock, just to be able to understand all the details, so thank you, as always, your work is magnificent. Cake for you! (but not for Mycroft, you know, to keep up with the diet) ;D

Very well done on the series... Congratulations.. Waiting for more

those vows were beautiful and suited the characters perfectly

What a wonderful story!

Another great chapter. I loved reading this story. I can't wait to read your next idea.

Aww what a sweet ending

Awww beautiful!

Another great chapter. I am loving daddy Mycroft. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

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