Really wish you could update, this is one of my favorites

Man i am loving this series, please continue it It just awesome Oh and please put Sugimura as a target in Mementos! That guy needs a serious attitude adjustment and a change of heart!

I'm really excited for the next chapter

hope this gets updated soon

My favourite takeaway from this chapter was how you're establishing that Haru was real, right from the early dates like the volleyball rally. One of the things I felt which came off as strange to me was how we could not see Haru (in a similar capacity we saw Makoto hanging out at the library during the first/second week of school) at her own hangout spots. Did she like a certain snack from the cafeteria? A favourite reading spot? Maybe she liked to garden after school? The few times I brought this up in a general Persona 5 forum, I got shot down haha. I guess not everyone feels that Haru deserves fair attention and deference -.- She deserves more love imo which was my main reason for putting this on my follow list a while ago. There are (alas) few Shujinkō x Haru longfics around. Which is a shame as her floofyness is charming on its own along with that angle of a Parisienne styled Phantom Thief being paired of with a Trickster who has Arsene (English gentleman) for a Persona. I could ramble on and on...

Anyway, I like what I've read so far here. There's a kind of sincerity in the prose which serves complimentary to one of the facets of Haru's nature. I like that. I intend to read more in the future, as time comes available.

VD

Your work is beautiful, sir. I hope you continue to see this through.

Thanks for the chapter.

Very nice chapter I loved seeing Ryuji and Haru both stand up for Akira. I also liked seeing Akira getting embarrassed as he is the calm pretty boy that doesn't get embarrassed often. Keep up the great work!

Although it would have been fun to see the cool confident Akira beat up the guy with words, it is more realistic that he would feel more guilty, instead of being ready to fight.

Nice fanfic man, keep up the good work. i really like how you make the story from Haru POV. I hope this fic can keep going until it's finish, and please dont make the story to dark LOL

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that ending.

Hopefully Sugimura will get his comeuppance this time around in the form of someone beating the shit out of him. Since in the game I feel like he didn't really get any satisfying comeuppance for what he did.

You should be proud of telling Haru's story. I applaud you.

Good. Haru's sadism is here. Very good.

The one person who really should've gotten a change of heart... yet that never happens. ...ever. Here's hoping that The Royal fixes that.

Honestly, I can imagine if there was anything that Akira would risk ruining his probation for... it would be smacking Sugimura upside the head for everything he did to Haru. Just seems like something that could possibly happen.

Let's hope next time is a lot more fun and stuff.

Thanks a lot for your work.
I always enjoy reading fanfics which follow a different POV than the original, specially if they are well written like this one is.
The chapters flow very nicely and great job on the characterizations and dialogues, they feel natural to me.
Patiently waiting for updates!