If you can't write characters as they are then you're seriously lacking as an author. Amateur writer or not, nerfing is a big no. And kindly read the manga and get Naruto's characterization properly. Or better yet, revisit and analyze actual clips on YouTube that aren't Naruto vs. Pein.

I really like it. I like how they were all spread out and are trying to find eachother. I hope you update soon!

Awww- KIBA NO DX(poor Akamaru XP) Welp, it would've been worse if Kurogiri saved Naruto instead and had the Kyuubi no Kitsune on their side... Ahh, the world would be on fire if that happened -.-

Great story so far very interesting. But FFS Naruto is too naive I honestly forgotten how naiive he was. He's not following protocols at all

I'm really glad that you updated! It's been a bit. I hope that you keep it up and whenever you're feeling out of it or that no one cares, were here and excited to read whatever you have planned next.
I wonder what's going to happen to everybody now that Naruto, Hinata, and Tenten are joining UA. At least I can be sure that it'll be good, it's so hard to find good crossovers in a sea of bad grammar and unreasonable plots but I'm glad that you decided to write this really good fic.

Keep it up!

And Momo, Urahara y la chica de pelo anaranjado de la clase b?

LOL And don't worry Tenten is doing exactly what she should be doing, following ninja protocol. Shikamaru and Akamaru as well. Kiba is borderline.

Naruto is too naive, and Hinata is a lost cause. I wonder how UA will react to the fact that they are all murders or assisted murders, will they still help? And I wonder how effective their chakra will be. Or if the gang will befriend the LOV.

Cant wait for the next chap~

I'm really liking the story so far! I'm curious to see how the situation evolves. The only thing that maybe feels a bit out of place is Naruto's overly naïve's behaviour. If it's post time skip, even though he's still a total idiot, he kinda matured even if just a tad bit, at least compared to his pre timeskip self. But that's really the only thing that I found odd

I'm really liking the story so far! I'm curious to see how the situation evolves. The only thing that maybe feels a bit out of place is Naruto's overly naïve's behaviour. If it's post time skip, even though he's still a total idiot, he kinda matured even if just a tad bit, at least compared to his pre timeskip self. But that's really the only thing that I found odd

Pls

Pls make more this is great

Yesyesyes I am awaiting a new chapter GLADLY AT THAT

Excellent job!

beautiful

Nooooo, Akamaru, you were so close!