does he still have IB or what? it not working properly. summoned poorly? weakened? I can't understand how what happen. it should be constant and the starting point so it being weakened means, the original values had changed. from zero to negative 1 or positive 1.

nice and sweet story. Ayu was added. Misaki and Touma together are cute. chuu2 kakine looks funny.

read kakine's side story too.

nice story but you need beta. some sentence didn't make sense, unless I read it again. sweet interactions between misaki and touma. loved it.

I have lost count of how many times i have read this, it's just so good. We got best girl Ayu so does this mean we will getting Seria? If we do than that be awesome but if we don't than that's okay as long as we get Kakine which I think is the most likely, well great chapter as always.

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You know, the story has 84k words, and this chapter alone is 25k... that's something. 5/17 to be more precise.

Anyway, long chapter, took me a few days to read, definetly must have a better proof-reading. Some parts were just plain difficult to read or understand (partly as I'm not a native speaker though, but somo were just plainly bad-written). On the bright side, the chapter was amazing and it really is the high point of the story so far. Our sweet and slightly depressing fanfic turned into a mess with characters realizing what they have to do for once, no doubts cast.

And now Kakine is going to enter into tye mess, huh? Quite a meds it will be, indeed. Are we going back to enter the Dark Side again, this time fully? Well, what would you know.

I would like to leave a longer review, but alas, I'm on my phone and my eyes hurt.

What else is there...? Oh yeah, character writting. Dunno if I said it before, but you quite manage to make each character feel different abd recognizable, and set their own tempos and pace as they interact with others. Even when it's about narrative it shines: then convey the way to view the world around them in a satisfactory, not rushed or forced way. Congratulation on that.

Finishing this, all only say that you check your PM after reading this (at least in my case FF isn't sending emails when a PM arrives). I want to say something else but I don't want to taint this with it (you guessed it, political garbage. I can't help it ok? Feel free to ignore it).

Well, see ya soon (or not so much) in the next chapter,
RedSS.

Splendid chapter and also you're welcome. Glad to be a help.

Looks like Misaki beats Accelerator as the first esper to be awakening. Using her newfound power to save Touma without losing his memory of her. This is also a quite unexpected event to Aleister as he didn't expected her early awakening, usually it would be Accelerator to be first to be awaken since he is number one of the Level 5s. He will likely readjust his plan because of this. In canon, only Accelerator who has awakened and for Kakine quite debatable if he was awakened or not since he has angelic wings.

About Touma's friend, Tsuchimikado and Aogami doesn't address Touma by his first name. They usually called him by his last name, Kamijou or Kami-yan. Also you need to watch out how other characters address to each other. Example like Misaka, she doesn't called Touma by his first and last name since she usually called him, "you" or "idiot", even in the latest volumes she still hasn't called him by his first and last name.

Also about Kakine, he has a manga, but unfortunately it's already ended with only four chapters.

Now that Yomikawa allowed Touma to enrolled to Nagatenjouki Academy, this give him an opportunity to develop and strengthen his ability so that he can face Kakine again. But do remember, we don't know what Nagatenjouki Academy looks like except for their school emblem and their school uniform since the school hasn't appear yet in the current light novels. I hope it made its appearance in Genesis Testament.

Since Touma will be enrolling to Nagatenjouki, you will be the first author to write Touma as a student of Nagatenjouki because I haven't read or seen any Toaru fanfiction that him being a student of Nagatenjouki. As for his school uniform if you look carefully at Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S Episode 3 when Misaka was using her hacking ability to see Shinobu's personal information, you can see a glimpse of the male uniform, they wear a formal blue and white uniform with black necktie.

That's it for now. I'll wait for your next update then.

It's here!

Thank you for your kind words D Alright, to the analysis.

1) Hand down one of your best chapter so far. The length of the chapter was perfect, I believe 18k-25k is pretty much the best for your story, it definetly give your chapter some "backbone".

2) You used Misaki's perspective, which is great, most of us readers want to see her as much as possible, so it's a good thing I believe. Keep that, particularly in the latter part of the story where Misaki will take part in event where Touma was suppose to be alone (The To Aru plot basically).

3) I liked the fact that Misaki was jealous, and even considered herlsef to be possessive and in need of Touma, the "because I wouldn't be able to live without you" was great. It really feels like she is in love, I like this.

4) The phone call with touma's mother was hilarious and sweet, I want them to meet in person ! If possible for a week end at the beach ? I mean it's summer, Touma have a beauty of a girlfriend, I guess a beach episode is necessary, we all want an embarassed bikini Misaki !

5) The introduction of Touma to the clique was perfect, god those girls are cute. Keep them in the story, they really are cool to read.

6) To a different and very specific topic : If I could give you one more advice for future chapter : you need Touma and Misaki's to be a bit more physical. They are what, 15 and 14 right ? I believe a new couple at that age would be kissing a lot more, and let's not even talk about cuddling. Hell, a third of the chapter was me thinking : "Touma you god damn fool, kiss her already !". I know, there relationship just started, so it's justified that they are still not all over the other, but it's precisely why you need to keep that in mind for the next chapters. They need to show there affection, particularly during those discussion they have where they transmit there feelings to each other. I guess it will take a bit more time for them to develop there relationship beyond that (sex yeah !), but just keep in mind that there relationship is just as much important as the plot itself (That's what the story is about after all, a MisakixTouma version of To aru ). You did very well on that part for this chapter.

7) The kiss at the very start was perfect, It's good to see "progress" between chapter, I like it. Last chapter Misaki confessed, this chapter : they had there first kiss. I believe you see the progression there, next chapter, you should aim for a less "chaste" kiss ! If you don't have a scene in mind, here is one : Misaki sleep at touma place because it rain extra hard and she can't go back. Touma cook for her (of course), then he give her the bed while he go for the couch, Misaki held him in her arms from behind, he turn back, share a sweet hug, they talk a bit, she say "Touma... I'm tired" and then drag him down, both of them falling on the bed. They just sleep, nothing more (they aren't that close yet). When he wake up, Touma see his girlfriend spread next to him on the bed, go on top of her, wake her up gently, and then when she is only half conscious he take her two cheeks in his hands and give her a not so chaste kiss (I mean lewd here) that she will remember all of her life as the best wake up call ever. They cuddle a bit more while having there conversion. Then she ask him to go make breakfeast because that's what husbands are for... Mwahahaha. Here, you have it ! That's just an example of course, it's your story not mine, but you can use this as a template if you don't really know what to put next chapter in term of cuddling.

8) I was happily surprised with the update, I didn't expected it that fast. Regarding that, make sure to not pass "too much" time proofreading your other chapters, a lot of authors start doing that and compeltly drop the story at that point. Again, there is nothing wrong with it, it won't necessary happen, just keep what I said in mind. I believe a chapter per month is a healthy thing for an author, and keep us readers into the story. I know it's hard tho.

Thank you for the amazing job. You're officialy one of my 3 favorite fanfic of all time D. Incidentally, the other two are "The greatest there was of ever will be" a Pokemon fic, and "All out of Tears", a Danmachi fanfic.

Will be checking for an update every god damn day, like I did this past month. Have a good day !

Cainabel202

all abroad the Touma X Misaki X Junko ship. with subconscious approval of the Queen.

Is that person Touma Contacted Kakine or Seria or it is Gukusai Kaibi...
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Keep it up.

I love this fic. I certainly missed it. My favorite parts of this chapter are Misaki talk with Shiina, her encounter with Ayu and her awakening. Although I think Touma will need to power up a bit for his future fights.

Well, ever since NT11 I shipped Touma x Misaki hard. And I was totally sure she'd adopt his mother's behavior sooner or later

Her after seeing Touma with another gal:
"Ara-ara, Touma-san..." It must run in Kamijou family, after all

But calling her officially a yandere, huh... True enough, :D Totally headcanon now.

Ever since I found out about NT11 and Misaki's past with Touma, I've been enamored with the ship. I still like shipping Touma with Misaka because Misaka's obsession with him is funny/cute as hell, but the tragedy of Misaki's relationship with Touma, her act of true love in saving him at the cost of any hope for a future with him, just makes me really hope he'll be able to remember her again one day. But since that might never happen, I'll take any fanfics shipping them that I can get!

Can't wait for next chapter

ITS BACK AGAIN!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Oh i miss reading this gem. Even better is that its a long chapter to boot.

Misaki and Shiina are getting along just fine. Including sharing secrets how to get hussies away from their men. Tsuchimikado and Aogami maybe onto something here. I'm beginning to suspect that Kamijou males have a thing for Yandere types. The tamer ones at least.

Can't wait until the parents meet Misaki in person.

Mentions of the the Yumiya sisters, Kumokawa Seria and now Mitsuari Ayu have entered the scene in jealousy mode. Oh boy, i have a bad feeling about this.

Even more bad yet hilariously news the two telepaths have now met face to face much earlier than in Canon. But hey at least they're trying to get along.

Keyword "TRYING". Ayu is not letting go Touma that easily.

It would seems Touma may have regret asking his father for love advice. Gee, i wonder why LOL

But the biggest change from Canon and how different this story is from A Certain Scientific Counter is that Misaki have briefly achieved her own an "awaken" state. This is... FUCKING AWESOME!

I can't wait what new ideas you have in store for future chapters.