Well Broon I hoped you're satisfied with your fucking decision cuz you lost the best thing of your life! But don't worry someone better will be by her side and love her something you couldn't do you fucking coward!

I despise Joffrey not just he's the bastard of the Wicked Bitch of the South Cersei, he's a sexist pig who should learn to never underestimate a woman and her skills or otherwise he'll find a dagger in his throat! I'm just glad he got his stupid ass self poisoned cuz I was done with him since Season 1!

Yeah I see Adelais with Sandor cuz Bronn is only thinking about the sex and will mostly likely break our Lady's heart. So Sandor I'm rooting for you! Also Meryn so suck Joffrey's small dick!

I'm rooting for Sandor cuz the guy deserves some love.

Seriously she needs to knock Bronn on his butt for that slap in the face before she even THINKS of taking him to bed again. Argh! Such good writing

I do like the fact you’ve chosen to focus on two of the characters who typically play more ancillary roles.

Well done. You spent enough time credibly building her walls and how Bronn can believably start taking them down.

All the chapters are well written but I refrain from commenting unless I have something more to say than “nice chapter!”

Nice setup for a relationship between Bronn and Adelais. I do find myself concerned for Tyrion’s well being if deprived of Bronn’s protection however.

Well written. You establish the tenor of the familial relationships. It might be helpful to provide more grounding to the established GoT world though given it is the first chapter and they’re all OCs. For example, where is House Aurbouroc located? And what year is it? I imagine we’ll find out the later when we meet the king.

Please update again soon it's such a great story!

You've caught my attention with this story, I'm interested to see what happens next.