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crazyKate92 chapter 8 . 10/7 I love this! I can’t wait for the next update! |
Lunanight19 chapter 1 . 10/1 Love this story so much |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/17 Im sad to see it's been a year already since you've updated this story. I really enjoyed the way this story and storyline is written. You have a way with words and they flow so nicely. I've read through a few a comments on people complaining it's a reverse harem and characters have been ooc. Good thing its fanfiction! Geez. I dont mind at all and i read all 8 chapters in a day. Even though im sure my husband and daughter didnt enjoy that hahaha Totally wishful thinking but I hope naruto and kagome can accept sasuke :D |
DeborahBee chapter 8 . 8/28 yooo really like this. it's pretty interesting. especially the world building. |
sesshylovr chapter 8 . 7/15 Love this story! |
Kit chapter 8 . 7/5 Really hope this story is continued. This is a great story! |
Ithillokte chapter 8 . 4/7 Oh I dearly hope it's not too late to say I love this! I hope you haven't given up on it, and I am willing to give assistance if you are stuck! I love how the comedy is just as much of a main feature as the serious bits, you balance it out well just like the anime does. Very Impressive! I love your writing style, you don't have to describe things at times, because the reader already pictures it happening, and that is some seriously talented writing! If it's not too much to ask, please continue! I am excited to see what happens to Kagome, if she can help Naruto fix and bring Sasuke back, all three's relationship, rooting for Naruto of course, I would not be reading a specifically naruto/kagome fic if I wasn't, and I hope Kagome and Naruto can make the same goals to do together, both as shinobi, and in their relationship. Naruto would love her irl, because she would have just automatically accepted him, and tried her best to ensure he was happy, and if he ever found out how Inu Yasha treated her in the series, he would have killed Inu Yasha, and tried to woo her himself, if only so she wouldn't end up hurt. Because Inu Yasha couldn't make up his mind until after Kikyou finally freakin died again to decide that he wanted Kagome, and it was only because he had no other option. That or he would have helped her finish her quest, protected her as best as he could from Inu Yasha, and then kidnapped her to Konoha after, and most likely played matchmaker to make sure she was happy. I have no idea who he would have matched her with, but he would have! He totally would have lured her with 'I want you to meet my friends, since I've met all yours already, come visit, please! I'm sure I can ask Ichiraku to make you some oden!' I really hope you continue this fic, the dynamic in everything here is seamless with Kagome's insertion into the fic. |
Ash chapter 1 . 4/4 Hi, I hope your're doing well and are safe. I'm re-reading all the chapters of your fanfic 'Unwanted' and l wanted to apologize for not leaving comments previously. To be honest this is probably my fourth time reading all the chapters. I love the way you write, and your stories' have brought me so much joy over the years. I figured that with my state issuing a "shelter-in-place" order, I can spend some of that time revisiting fanfic's that I have adored. I absolutely love how you started out the chapter with Tsunade already drained with having to deal with Naruto's stubbornness. After reading this part, I was already looking forward to how she was going to deal with the situation. I was so happy that you included an adult Shippo! Most crossovers I've read usually have Shippo as a kid, so I was ecstatic about this and the possibilities with his character. I really enjoyed the way you wrote the camaraderie between Inuyasha, Kagome, and Shippo. It really fits their characters and echoes the endless scenes of Inuyasha and Shippo bickering with each other in the anime and Kagome having to step in. I also really love how you wrote the inuyasha gang in Shikimaru's perspective, I found myself back talking to him a couple of times, when he kept making too many assumptions. Although, I was jumping out of my seat when Shikimaru pointed out the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I'm always delighted when these two beings have any sort of interaction together. Naruto's line at the end of the chapter had me laughing just because I couldn't help but imagine Tsunades' and Shikimarus' reactions in seeing their effort in making this situation going smoothly as possible and Naruto blowing that up in his arrival. |
MilaKimari chapter 8 . 3/5 I hope to read more, this is really good and funny |
Lunanight19 chapter 8 . 3/1 Please update the next one |
Genesis Perez Vejar chapter 8 . 2/19 Ame esta historia, es tan increíble, me encanta el apego a los personajes y el giro pervertido que tiene la mayoría, por favor continúa esto pronto! |
fiahy567 chapter 8 . 2/3 Update a another chapter please |
Biggest Fan chapter 8 . 1/31 Update soon please I will be forever grateful |
Biggest Fan chapter 8 . 1/9 Still love this story |
Frog chapter 8 . 12/9/2019 Sorry I accidently sent my other review before I finished. If you ever continue Unwated, I'd be More than happy to read it. If not, thank you writing and sharing your Awesome stories ;) Sincerely Frog |