| Reviews for Harbinger |
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   LegendaryMob chapter 2 . 9/1 It has been good and interesting so far. Wish it was atleast 10 chapters to have a more accurate gauge on how things will proceed and stuff. Anyways, thanks for the chapter and hope for more. |
| Xero619 chapter 2 . 5/27 amazing. go go go. |
| gameboy1001 chapter 1 . 4/28 This is very sweet. I could definitely see Ash doing something like that. Overall, I love it. Keep it up. |
| Gouravsilentreader chapter 2 . 4/17 Awesome story Love it very much Every scene was amazing Waiting for the next part eagerly Please update soon |
| xaxki chapter 2 . 4/11 This is such an interesting take, I’m really looking forward to seeing where it goes |
| Razai chapter 1 . 4/9 The only thing I understood is that Ash is an idiot. |
| Squidgod812 chapter 2 . 3/21 awesome story |
| Felix12791 chapter 2 . 2/5 Well, I am here again. The chapter is pretty good, just like the first. But I think Ash is actually too OP. Maybe is just a feeling. I be waiting for the next chapter, your imagination and skills to write a story are awesome. Miss my english, again... |
| Lazymanjones96 chapter 2 . 1/29 Interesting stuff looking forward to more |
| Zentari2238 chapter 1 . 1/22 What bullshit. He should apologize for the sun's glare being harsh on Ralts too, it's not like he hasn't apologized for everything else yet. |
| ichika aono chapter 2 . 1/21 This is an interesting take on, ash's journey, you have here. I wonder what you'll do next in the story. I look forward to reading more. Till the next one. |
| ichika aono chapter 1 . 1/21 Well dang this a great first chapter. And that's not even including how unique it is. |
| anOwlandStuff chapter 2 . 1/10 I really enjoyed these two chapters! Your writing style is engaging, and I love how you've built up this story's pokemon world so far. Does Ash's ability to sense emotions have to do with Aura or is it something else? Keep up the good work! |
| L chapter 2 . 1/10 Hmm. Good story. I like that you are using different pokemon than standard. Metagross is my favourite Hoenn pokemon. I would love for you to incude that pokemon. Looking forward to another update. |
| Kurakuma chapter 2 . 1/10 Glad to see you back . I really love the interaction between Ash and the other characters, be it the growing trust -or at least mutual comfort- between he and his pokémon or the peculiar interaction between he and the somewhat eccentric Winona they both felt like realistic developments and dialogues. And the way you describe things is Enthralling. When I saw you put out a new chapter I went back to read the first one again to refresh and got sucked in all the way until I reached the end of this one (and was still thirsty for more tbh). Some bits had me giggling, while the two flocks fighting and Ash wanting Winona to help fix it made me anxious and even a bit upset of their behalf when I thought she wasn't going to help them. I am whipped for this fic, two chaps in and I love it Thanks for making my night3 |
