| Reviews for Artificial Sweetener |
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   Catmey93 chapter 6 . 3/25 Please update |
| Taylor9901 chapter 6 . 8/9/2019 I love it. |
| TwinSofia chapter 6 . 8/8/2019 The stress! I'm so intrigued and ready for more 33 |
| mnnlisa chapter 6 . 8/4/2019 I wonder what Sam has on Edward. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2019 If Edward is a legitimate business man, why does he want to mess with people who have ties to the mafia? |
| LRK860 chapter 6 . 8/1/2019 Edward is a mystery. Now you have me wondering what Emily meant. And I loved Bella's question at the end. She seems to read him so well, and she also seems to have a deep connection on an unconscious level. Can't wait to meet the families. |
| EdwardsGuardianAngel chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 Can't wait for next update. Liking this story a lot. |
| tas62 chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 The secret is most obviously related to Bella |
| sandy4321 chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 This is such a great story! Great chapter! |
| acw1 chapter 6 . 7/31/2019 :) |
| BridieM chapter 6 . 7/30/2019 Very enjoyable read. Thank you |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/1/2019 I am enjoying your story and looking forward to more. |
| BridieM chapter 5 . 7/2/2019 Leave ‘me wanting more. ;D Good chapter. Thank you |
| Taylor9901 chapter 5 . 7/1/2019 You are evil |
| LRK860 chapter 5 . 6/30/2019 That cliffie could be someone who knows Bella or Edward. They both seem so happy to get to know each other. You're hinting that they're going to have a lot of roadblocks along the way. And I think it's sad that Bella and Renee have a strained relationship. Phil must be one giant a-hole to Bella for her to dislike him so much. What exactly happened when she was given the money for school she asked for? A lot of people hate asking for money, but her feelings about this are more intense than embarrassment. And I'm really not sure what I feel about Alice as Bella's friend. Your earlier chapter showed Jessica not liking her. I think. She just had a strange reaction when she knew she was there. I also wonder if Jasper is spending more money than he should to keep Alice happy.(He's always counting it in the registers!) Looking forward to getting some answers:) |
