Amazing writing! I can't wait for Chapter 4 :)

I'm soo glad you made Percy unpredictable and intelligent that other people cannot read and he is powerful beyond comprehension of wizards they just don't know what they are dealing with when it comes to him nice

This is brilliant writing! Applause all to you! Honestly this story could rank up within top3 pjo/hp stories I ever read, and I love your writing style and the way you lay out your stories. Please more!

V nice update again soon plx

Your story is well written, and at the more serious parts It is good. But some parts especially the conversations between Percy and Sally don't feel right, either from to many jokes, or their relationship not really feeling like mother and son, but more like friends.

Ah, this was interesting! I'm so glad Sally's a witch! So many stories shove her to the side, forgetting Percy's a wizard from her side. I just- I love this fic so much.

your description of rats was truly wonderful.

This is honestly the best HP/PJ crossover I’ve read. All of the characters are well written and fully fleshed out and the plot is excellent! Can’t wait for your next chapter!

I couldn't review on the previous update because I had already reviewed before you changed it, so here is the review I meant to leave on the first episode: This is excellent so far! I usually don't like having OCs in fanfiction, but you incorporated them in a not too obtrusive way and had them contribute to the story while not actually being a huge part, which I like. Lots of backstory put in. I like how you have 'Voldemort's grandson' in the description, you have a lot of buildup to the actual reveal in the story. I loved the bit with Snape and the librarian too.

I love this story and I'm so glad to see that it updated! I'm happy to see that you did the research for Sally's and Percy's wands. Ebony and redwood fit Sally and Percy so well (respectively) and I like your choices (especially the good luck bit). Honestly, I find this story unique because it not only introduces the characters realistically through well-written chapters, but also that it starts out at the Half-Blood Prince and not the Order of the Phoenix. I'm bouncing with excitement for the next chapter, which I hope Harry will meet Percy or at least learn of his existence (the way I put that sounds really creepy lol). I wonder how Harry's friends will react to this... I alway feel like Ron is getting bashed during these types of stories, jumping up and trying to attack Percy (Jackson) when he barely moves towards his friends. Yes, he's overprotective, but no, he's smarter than judging an entire character off of one of his relatives (kind of distant at that- since they probably didn't know each other). He would probably be wary though... hmm. Anyways, I enjoyed the new update! Thank you for your wonderful writing! :))

I think your timeline is off. When Percy first goes missing in The Lost Hero, Annabeth tells Jason it was during winter break. I believe in The Son of Neptune it’s mentioned that it is already June because Hera kept Percy out for 6 months. I want to say it was already July by House of Hades because there’s a mention of Annabeth’s birthday being in July and that she was already 17. I want to say the timeline to beat Gaia was early August, can’t say for sure since it’s been a while since I ready the book. So if you give the Kane crossover a month or so, what ever “readings” picked up from Percy would have been around September/October, making Percy 17. Other than that, I kinda like where you’re going with this :). Hope to see more.

não acredito que você parou de escrever essa história incrível
Trate já de continuar

Lol plz update this is really good

Dude, there is magic in America in the H.P universe.

I absolutely love your creative take on this story! I can’t wait to read what happens next!